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Re: Home
Your house could have the most expensive decorations in the world, but if you live with people who never make the time for you or do not love you then ...
Apr 8, 2022 -
Re: What is Happiness?
You have a very queer view of happiness and I am very intrigued by it. If we cannot identify something, is it real? Sure, some things can make us happy ...
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Re: Void
As children we are told to be patient, by middle school we're told to get over things, and in high school, we are told that things heal with time. How ...
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Re: A Letter to my Younger Self
Goodness, I relate to this so much. We all have things that we regret. Whether we are looking back two years or twenty, we all have done things that we ...
Apr 5, 2022 -
Re: On Useless Talk
Your poem seems to really apply to everyday life. Too often, other people tear other people down. And for what? Do they have their own insecurities, hidden anger, mental/physical abuse, ...
Apr 5, 2022 -
Re: Nightmare Neverland
The person you are writing about seems to be unhealthily addicted to something. It may be drugs, a toxic person, or perhaps they are struggling with something else like anxiety. ...
Apr 5, 2022 -
Re: Insecure
Pose in front of a camera Wearing a fake smile; A real one doesn’t last enough For a camera to capture it. Then they wonder why the picture came out ...
Jan 26, 2022 -
Re: Banned from Existence
At first, I couldn’t remember anything. I was only aware of falling, twisting and turning for an eternity before arriving here, a vast, blinding white abyss full of nothing. I ...
Jan 2, 2022 -
Re: bitter pill
I learned to read between the lines of the emotions that you hide you said what you meant and I thought that you might be scared of it It sounds ...
Nov 25, 2021 -
Re: Nightmare
Nightmare, creeping into your dream. Some familiar faces are scarier than they seem. It seems like the main character is feeling betrayed or threatened by someone close to them. Do ...
Nov 15, 2021 -
Re: Oh, what a wonderful thing
Oh, what a wonderful thing, to be in love Your heart always in a sling, to it a slave Let me ask you a question. Now listen well If you ...
Nov 13, 2021 -
Re: Welcome to life
Welcome to life You’re breathing. Equipped with free will, you’re human That’s the one thing you’ll have till’ you chest holds still. Keep breathing And breathing And breathing Try not ...
Nov 13, 2021 -
Re: Oh child of love
Oh child of love You are too sweet Too soft Too kind It seems someone is talking to a young, naive child. You want what is best And so do ...
Nov 13, 2021 -
Re: Breathing
Breathe in Let their careless words engulf you Let their hatred drown you Breathe it in. Breathe out Hear the chorus sing “Why are you so negative” “Why to me” ...
Nov 13, 2021 -
Re: Eye to eye (echos)
I see. Through glass-blue, no, black eyes, I, the coward, observe. ~ Arms wrapped around me, your lips spell “I love you” But your eyes, blue, no, red say nothing ...
Nov 13, 2021
