Areida

Mrs. Weasley is the bomb. I'm so glad she got a chance to shine at the end of the book. It kind of reminded me of Eowyn in LotR: "I ...

That's probably the problem with it. I really should just sit down and force it to be a flash fiction sort of thing. So yeah, I agree with you. Thanks ...

I was digging though your portfolio and found this piece, with virtually no replies. I think it would work better as flash fiction or prose. Also, the title fits well. ...

whence - Hehe... not into voyeurism? ;) Thanks for the suggestions. I'll work on re-wording the second stanza in particular. And yeah, those West Point full dress uniforms are frickin' ...

Agreed. Any thoughts about this one in particular? ;)

Thanks for your comments! My only real crit in that the ending seemed short. I know the narrator might not know what happened to Will, but we need to otherwise ...

I'm not gonna lie: sisters are amazing. Thanks for reading and replying! :D

Thanks to all who replied! Addie... stop being vain. ;) I think it's great. I especially liked the fourth stanza. I think I'd take the "every day" out of the ...

Nobody's trying to come down on the story, atariel, just trying to give her some constructive feedback. It's a cute story. :D

But Norry's not a pirate!

No problem! That's my latest grammar thing. Ever since I learned it I've been correcting people left and right... hehe. The only thing that bugs me now is that this ...

No! Don't hate it! I like it. Ari hath spoken. *bangs gavel*

Thank you so much for your comments. If you have any suggestions at all, or if there was anything you would like to see tweaked, please do not hesitate to ...

Thanks, Sarah. It's great to hear from you again; I've missed seeing you around! I will definitely take all your suggestions with me as I revise this sucker. Myth - ...

Hahaha... Because what's a YWS/SPEW fanfic without a little nudity? And I love the Dono/Hunter/Phoenix thing. That's awesome.