Areida

I'm definitely not a poet, but I liked it too. It felt frustrated.

Meh. They wouldn't all work. Here's the link for the other two:

Normally I wouldn't do this but I need some really harsh feedback (who ever would have thought I'd ask someone to rip my story to shreds.. :wink: ). SoooOooOo....*shameless bump*

Very well-written and your descriptions are great. I don't like the cursing, but I suppose it helps personify your characters. Good job.

I don't have any criticism either...I really liked this. your eyes smile at me through a pixelated webcam. and that's all i know of your soft slim figure. That was ...

Ooh...very dark and creepy...but good....very good.

I think I'm going to have to agree with nicklepickle on this one...

....shameless bump....

I want to be afraid. I want to run away. I want to go back home. But I can’t make myself feel that way. If I can’t feel anything here, ...

You're welcome. :mrgreen: :D :thumb:

lol....that's a really good one...*laughs*

...very intense....

oops...sorry about the double post, lol...

I'm not quite sure what to say. That was really, really beautiful and you made it come to life. That's so sweet and romantic, but true at the same time. ...

I'm not quite sure what to say. That was really, really beautiful and you made it come to life. That's so sweet and romantic, but true at the same time. ...