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Re: Hide and Seek: The Child
emotion_less-- It happened right as school was beginning. She was running a bit late. But no, I never get tired of hearing people say they like what I write. Thanks ...
May 29, 2005 -
Re: love.the lover and the beloved
It's pretty good...the title immediately makes me think of Song of Solomon. Not sure if that's what you were going for, but it's good.
May 29, 2005 -
Re: the effects of boredom
I like it too... it was cool.
May 29, 2005 -
Re: crashing tears and there are no more smilies left to give...
Beautiful, Brad. I agree with Chevy, it would make a great song. Awesome job.
May 29, 2005 -
Re: No Title Yet
It's sort of hard to tell from this little bit, but at the moment it seems pretty typical... maybe once you get going it'll be better. Right now, however, it's ...
May 24, 2005 -
Re: For my Father on his Birthday
I'm sure he did, how could he not? This has actually inspired me to write a poem for my dad for father's day, but thus far it is falling pathetically ...
May 22, 2005 -
Re: the tears that fall- the perfection of a woman in love
Hehe...thanks Crysi. :D
May 21, 2005 -
Re: That Day - written February 8th, 2004
Oh, wow, I loved this. Only one thing, very minor. I'm pretty sure that the spelling on cocoon is with an 'o' and not an 'a.' Other than that, wow. ...
May 19, 2005 -
Re: Book...a very good book...
I love the Sisterhood of the Travelling Pants...I'm going to read the third one as soon as my finals are over...:mrgreen:
May 19, 2005 -
Re: Dante's Divine Comedy
Paradiso is probably the least-liked of all three parts in the Comedy. It lacks in gory description so common of Inferno and contains many lengthy lectures on things like the ...
May 19, 2005 -
Re: Dante's Divine Comedy
I like it as a whole, but Purgatory might actually be my favourite...oddly enough. Inferno scared me...LOL...
May 19, 2005 -
Re: Dante's Divine Comedy
That's awesome, Snoink! I think it's really cool how he wrote the poem in the vernacular Italian so that his countrymen could read it, rather than writing it in the ...
May 19, 2005 -
Re: Dante's Divine Comedy
Oh, come on, you guys! Somebody must have read it!
May 19, 2005 -
Re: the tears that fall- the perfection of a woman in love
CL-- Wow... that sounds like my poem's about to be ripped to shreds...LOL... but go right ahead. I'm definitely no poet, so if you're willing to help I'll take any ...
May 18, 2005 -
Re: A Different Kind of Goblin 1: Crossing
Wow. Great job, Reich...this is really impressive. Very few spelling errors, great building tension, fabulous lines...marvelous. Just marvelous.
May 17, 2005
