Areida

Hi yuriiko! This is the first thing I've read of yours, and actually, the first review that I've done in months. I used to be on the site multiple times ...

Hahaha, oh, Jabs, you are just too much. I really enjoyed reading this... waaaaay too much fun. The only suggestion I would make is to do a little research to ...

Hi Kamas! I really enjoyed your take on this. The fresh perspective was a lot of fun to read, but you have several errors in form and style that distract ...

JACK! YOU WROTE! AHHH!!! I'm so excited! Okay, seriously. I'm so excited I can't actually critique this right now, because nothing will come out except thelrkjelakjkfljelkajfklejawlf lksjfos SO EXCITE

city rooftops and too-bright skies grant courage to those who leap. soft cradle below of beautiful lies, silenced wings from the darkness rise, and gently land in a heap. I ...

A very sweet little story. :D I love that song by Josh Groban, and I really like the idea of her brother, a soldier, being the one to give her ...

Ohhhh Ms. Hart is it? How interesting.... I'll be checking for updates of our hero's infatuation periodically - you can't abandon this one, Griffy! You must follow it through to ...

Hey there... Not a bad premise/start to a story, but it felt a little "off" to me the whole time. My first instinct was that you were referring to Henry ...

Hi there! This is a really cute story. I just happened to glance over it, then decided to read the whole thing. It makes for a nice short story. You're ...

Hey Morgan! Like Zan, I don't really have anything to pick on either. Then again, we all know I've never done more than just gush over poetry since I don't ...

'Rina Pi: How do I love thee? Let me count the ways... 1) WTF? Who else would have thought of this? 2) The exploration of the relationship between Bruce Wayne ...

I'm the second of four girls, and both my mom and my older sister have been Little Women fans as far back as I can remember. It took me till ...

Hey chocoholic! This is the other piece you asked me to look at about eight thousand years ago, so my apologies for taking so long to get to it. Now, ...

Hey Monki! Generally your grammar is all right, but I'm not a big fan of your phrasing and punctuation. I understand that sometimes we just think in choppy sentences, but ...

Hi sportgurl! Snoink is right - From what I've read quoted in the old reviews, to what you have posted now, you are definitely making progress. Snoink seems to have ...