Areida

My turn to echo all the praise. This poem was great... Like I just said in a crit of something else a few minutes ago, I love it when poetry ...

I think bob covered it pretty well (he's just cool like that). I thought it was interesting, but maybe a bit rushed. I'm no poet myself, but the thing that ...

Dang, Dusky. You know you're disgustingly good, right? I mean, really. Dang . Like *singsoffkey* said, there were typos and jazz, but I know you can fix 'em. I only ...

The day was perfect, the sun was bright, the sky so blue with wisps of fluffy clouds. You would have though you walked into a painting. It was just like ...

Oooh, I love haikus, especially when they're done well, like this one. Like bubbles said, there's not a whole lot to critique, but you wrote it very well, and created ...

Chocolate... Everyone should write something about chocolate. I know chocolate has gotten me through more than one tough day. *sniffles* I owe it so much. :D

It's funny when you think about a lot of books censured from kids high school and below, and yet they still read Shakespeare. He was so bawdy. I've read Hamlet, ...

Wow. Talk about heartfelt, not to mention heart-wrenching. Comments: I'm aware that your life lines are leaving your body Should "life lines" be "lifelines?" Anyone know? The two words just ...

I was sad that it ended. It was amusing me, even if Dunce #1 was starting to get on my nerves. I think the problem with her was that she ...

I like the ending, but the piece as a whole just rubs me the wrong way for some reason. I think it's because I have a good friend who, when ...

You're quite sickening, Snoink. I don't think I know a more thorough critiquer, and you can write. You're disgusting. I think all the little things were covered, but I quite ...

Wow. Um... Honestly, I'd be more than happy to read this and give you my suggestions, but I can't read that big a hunk of text on a computer screen. ...

Eeeeenteresting... Veeeerry eenteresting... The subject matter is certainly engaging, and you definitely have an original setting and original characters. All I think you really have to worry about no

I much enjoyed it. I'm one of those people that thinks the best name for a cat is "Target" so I got a kick out of the poem in general. ...

Only one of his I've read is East of Eden , which I loved. He's a great writer. Now I can't wait to see the movie... It's got James Dean ...