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Re: The Perfect Woman
Admittedly, very on the nose.
Jan 20, 2025 -
Re: Have Some Champagne
Thank you for taking the time to review my poem. I agree with your suggestions, it could do with some minor revisions with word choices.
Jan 20, 2025 -
Re: Transition
Thank you for the feedback
Jan 20, 2025 -
Re: no rest for the damned
In that case, you have done those people justice
Jan 18, 2025 -
Re: How To Fool Innocent People Online?
"Josef K. facepalmed."
Sep 15, 2014 -
Re: The Flight was on time...
Oh. It appears I have been mixing my genres up. I assumed by the title of the piece that it was comedy, as well as the end line, i.e. what ...
Aug 2, 2014 -
Re: 1
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Jun 10, 2014 -
Re: Freudian Romance
Ok, so, I will not quote the whole poem, as it really is something to take into account as a whole. XD It really is a marvel in comedy and ...
Mar 12, 2014 -
Re: The Rape of Eve
O.O
Mar 11, 2014 -
Re: The Most Exciting-Terrifying-Super-Exstatic-Fun-arific-Ultra-Scary-Adventure
Calm down.
Jan 28, 2014 -
Re: Jazz Hands
No worries. What did you think of the poem content wise?
Jan 19, 2014 -
Re: Gay Fairyland
Gay as in happy, i.e. reaching a place of eternal happiness; a utopia, if you will.
Dec 29, 2013 -
Re: The Dove, the Tortoise and the War (Part 2 the Twelve Days Before Christmas) *Edited*
*Awesome
Dec 24, 2013 -
Re: The Death Puppy
A hundred years isn't enough and won't be sufficient being with her
Dec 3, 2013 -
Re: The Death Puppy
LOL
Dec 3, 2013