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Re: Original Masterpiece
Hey there! I'm Arc and I'm here to review! Okay, so firstly, put an age rating on this, because it contains a lot of foul language. Now, more on that ...
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Re: Assorted boxes
Hey Trident! I'm Arc, here to review! So, as soon as I read this I thought there were too many starts and stops which made it a bit hard and ...
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Re: This
Hey probablynot! I'm Arc, here to review! So I really did like this piece. I enjoyed how it was like continuous story type thing because I always think that's quite ...
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Re: You Are Loved
Hey PixieStix! I'm Arc, here to review! :D I think you had a really nice theme running along here which made it really pleasant to read. I also like the ...
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Re: Drowning
Hey alabasterwolveness! I'm Arc, here to review! So firstly when I read this, i really did enjoy if because I just thought it was quite sweet. And it was one ...
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Re: Rescue Me
Hey Lylas! I'm Arc here to review! Okay, so firstly, my initial thoughts on this were there are some interesting themes her which are quite good to write about and ...
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Re: Over Exposure
Hey Adam! Here to review! Well, your lyrics never fail to interest me because you're a really good song-writer! Keep it up, I say! So, what I really liked about ...
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Re: Dreaming
Hey, inkstainedhands! I'm Arc, and I'm here to review! So, after I first read this I really did enjoy it. I think it was quite clever, and it flowed really ...
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Re: Fear
Hey Kyla! I'm Arc and I'm here to review this! So, just a quick note, I'm not very good with poetry critiques, but I'll try my best! My first impression ...
Feb 24, 2013 - Re: Fear Feb 24, 2013
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Re: Less Than Nothing
Hey there, darkangel_25! I'm Arc, here to review! So, I think with these lyrics you've definitely put forward a lot of emotion which was felt by the readers. it can ...
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Re: Lexical Gaps
Hey Wiki! So, I wasn't really sure how to review this piece at first because I wasn't really sure what it was. My first impression when I read it was ...
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Re: Broken Jar (Rewritten)
Hey there, Cole! Firstly, *applauds*, this was an amazing piece of writing and it was so sensational. Admittedly, I saw how long it was and I was like myself, "oh ...
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Re: The Creek
Hiya Shearwater! Here to review as requested :) I have to say, I really enjoyed reading this. I think it was a really sweet story, with a really nice idea ...
Jan 8, 2013 -
Re: Z-Day
Hello, DeepBlack! Here to review as requested :D So firstly, I'll start with what I liked. Your story is very intriguing and it really does want to make me read ...
Jan 8, 2013
