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Re: Lugnut's Lullaby
Hi Dannie, here for another review. Okay, so what I liked most about this was the imagery created. I thought it was really quite strong, and just quite nice. You've ...
Jun 30, 2013 -
Re: Solomon's Tower Chapter 2
Hiya Ray, I have returned for part 2! I thought with this chapter was much better than the last in terms of getting straight to the point. Many of the ...
Jun 30, 2013 -
Re: Solomon's Tower Chapter one
Hiya, Ray! I saw chapter 2 of this, so I thought I'd take a look at chapter 1 before I reviewed the other one. I really like the whole idea ...
Jun 30, 2013 -
Re: Being "That Kid": How NOT to be a Massive D-Bag
Hiya Dannie, here to review you on this fine review day! Okay, so this was really clever and rather hilarious really. It did seem very American to me, which I'm ...
Jun 30, 2013 -
Re: The Escape
Hi Idrinkink! Here to review your poem. I really like how this told a story. I've always been fond of when poems and lyrics tell stories, and I think you ...
Jun 30, 2013 -
Re: Highlight
Hi, darkangel! I'm Arc, here to review your lyrics. The layout of this was really good, in my opinion. I like how you has verses, a chorus and a bridge. ...
Jun 30, 2013 -
Re: The Past (2) *Revised*
Hiya singingwriter! I have returned for part 2 :D You've done it again! And by that I mean you've left it at a really good cliff-hanger which really makes me ...
Jun 30, 2013 -
Re: The Past (1) *Revised*
Hi singingwriter1673! I noticed part 2 of this in the Green Room, so I thought I'd read and review this before moving onto that. What I especially liked about this ...
Jun 30, 2013 -
Re: Never Looked Back
Hey paige! I shall be reviewing your lyrics today. What I liked about this honestly was the form. I mean, I know you've used quite a widely used sort of ...
Jun 30, 2013 -
Re: Reitha: Host of the Flame-chapter 0
Hiya illitar! I'm Arc, here to review :) I think the strong point of this was your descriptions. They were really quite beautiful sometimes, and I think your use of ...
Jun 30, 2013 -
Re: The Witnesses (1)
Hey abelgaiya! Here to review your piece. Okay, so what I liked about this was your pacing. I thought that it slowed really well, the ideas were easy to understand- ...
Jun 30, 2013 -
Re: The Game
Hello, Imag! Here to review :) I was really excited when I saw the title and description because I could get a sort of inkling of what it was about. ...
Jun 30, 2013 -
Re: White Speckled Frogs
Nebs! Here to review :3 So I saw this and I thought, ‘I’ve never actually seen Niebla’s writing’. When I read this I was truly amazed. This I believe is ...
Jun 30, 2013 -
Re: The Boy Who Broke Mirrors (Chapter One)
Hiya Skinsy! Here to review as requested (and on review day, which makes this extra special) :D Alright, so what I really enjoyed about this was your style. When I ...
Jun 30, 2013 -
Re: The Words You Sing to me
Hiya ariana, I shall be your reviewer on this fine review day! :D I was going to start off by saying I agreed with you in saying it’s a bit ...
Jun 30, 2013