ArcticMonkey

Hi skorlir- here to review, sorry about the delay! Right well this certainly was interesting. I mean it's not really like something I've read before, which is a good thing ...

Hiya peggy! Here finally for your review, sorry for the delay. Right I'm going to start straight with things I liked. I really liked the whole idea of it and ...

Hey Sparky! Here to review your story that I'm ever so glad you posted ^^ Right, I'll start off with the things I liked. I really liked the fact that ...

Hello lily! Here to review your story- I've always been very fond of short stories, so I just had to read this! I'm going to start with the things I ...

Hiya Wonder! Here to review your prologue~ Seeing as this is so short, I'm going to review it paragraph by paragraph, my corrections/comments will be in bold. Then I'll give ...

Hiya rbt00! Okay, so when I say this was a song parody, I just had to review it! I think this is a really good start, you have some funny ...

Hi Rain! Here to review as requested, sorry for the delay. Right, I'm going to get straight onto the things I liked about this poem. I quite liked the simplicity ...

Hiya Gooner, here finally for that review :) Okay, so I liked quite a few things about this chapter one. One being the ending, why you be so cruel to ...

Hi jon! Here to review as requested. I'm going to start this review off by talking about what I liked. Now, I haven't really been fond of pirate stories in ...

Hiya Horus, here to review as requested! Right, I think the strongest point of this piece was your ending. It was really thought-provoking, I didn't quite get it at first ...

Hi tigg! So I've never actually reviewed a review of a film, so I'll try my best to give my thoughts. I'll start with what I liked, then talk about ...

Hi Angel! Here to review your story. Okay, let's get straight with it. I really liked the ending you've left in on, I always think it's great to leave on ...

Hi Demora! I think you've used some lovely imagery in this poem. You say it's based on an avatar, so I think you've done a pretty good job with talking ...

Hi Jordan! Let's get right to the review! I really liked the darkness of this (I'm not a sadist, I swear!), especially towards the end. I'm quite a fan of ...

Hi darkangel! I love reading song lyrics! I'm going to start with saying stuff I liked, then a couple of improvements, then I'm going to give you my overall impression. ...