ArcticMonkey

Hi Strange, here to review your story! What drew me to read this was the title because I immediately thought of the film, which I happen to love. I'll start ...

Hiya killyou! I'm not quite sure why this is in scripts, so you might wanna move it to poetry, but anyways, here to review your piece. Firstly, I absolutely loved ...

Hiya lily! Here to review as requested on this fine review day. So as soon as I read this I thought wow, she knows how to describe stuff. I thought ...

Hiya demoness! Here to review your poem. So I'm going to be honest, when I saw the title of this I wasn't expecting much, but I was pleasantly surprised. I ...

Hiya sylviae! Here to review your prologue. I've not actually read Harry Potter, so I'll try not to let that get in the way of the review too much. I'll ...

Skinsssss! Here to review as requested, although you said I needn't worry about reviewing the other chapters, I hadn't actually read them yet so I read them then gave my ...

Here for chapter 3! Righty, you've gotten some pretty good reviews which I've skimmed over a bit so I don't repeat anything anyone else has said, but if I do ...

Hi Skins! Okay, so this will probably be a shorter review, but I'll just try and give all my thoughts on this chapter and be as helpful as possible. Sorry ...

Hey Ayumi, here to review your story! Well this was certainly exciting. I like the was that the suspense was built up and every bit was sort of a clue ...

Hiya dark! Here to review your lovely song lyrics. I haven't reviewed song lyrics on here in ages so I'm uber excited because they're probably my favourite thing to review. ...

Hero! Here to review as requested~ So basically, I saw that this was a fan fiction of the Raven, and I thought the smart thing to do would be to ...

Hiya Idrinkink, here to review :) Although short, I think this piece has loads of true meaning to it and definitely leaves me thinking. You can tell there were a ...

Hiya wholesome! Here to review~ So what I liked about this was the idea behind it. I admit, I can't really see the mythological elements coming through, but I'm sure ...

Hi golden! Here to review~ Firstly, i think you should definitely continue this story, it's got loads of potential so don't ever feel you need to stop! It's a really ...

Hi Valkyrie, here to review your story! Firstly, wow, you certainly know how to use good descriptions. I thought that was a particular strong point of this whole piece, I ...