ArcticMonkey

Hiya Deanie! Here to review your story! I've actually been meaning to review this for a while, and it's been in a Green Room for longer than it should've been ...

Hi Cutieexox! Here to review your story! At first glance, this is pretty short but I still think that you've done a fantastic job at leaving a cliff-hanger and just ...

Hi Paige! Ooh you're so sadistic enjoying writing a sad chapter :P. I'm just kidding, I can see why you'd enjoy writing this chapter in particular, it's quite an emotional ...

Hi again Sushi! So I've returned for the next part of your story. I'll start off with what I liked about this and that was that you've introduced some characters ...

Hiya Sushi! I was about to start reviewing chapter one of this, but then I noticed you've posted a prologue too, so I thought I'd read that first to avoid ...

Hiya Bre :} Here to review as requested I'll start off by saying poetry reviews aren't really my strong point, so sorry if this review turns out a bit useless, ...

Hiya Skinsy! Here to review the next part of your novel :) Well I can certainly for sure say know that you never fail to leave me wanting more by ...

Hiya Emilie! Here to review your poem today~ The thing that really drew me in to read this poem was the title. It might have something to do with the ...

Hiya wd! Here to review this piece of yours! Okay, I thought this was a really strong piece with just so so much emotion that really connected with the reader. ...

Hiya Nightly! I've returned to review some more of your work!~ I guess the main things I really liked about this was the theme because I like how it was ...

Hiya dasia, here to review this piece~ Right so I think this has a really interesting message, and I guess something quite hard to talk about. All I really know ...

Hiya MaskedGurl! Here to review~ Considering that this is pretty short, I'll try and be as specific as possible with my critiques! I'll start off with the things I liked ...

Hiya whitepencil, here to review! So what I liked about this was how the suspense and tension was built. It really gave it a chilling and eerie vibe which is ...

Hiya Philosopha (cool username). Here to review your poem~ So, I think the best part of this poem is how you've executed the rhyming here. I've read loads of poems ...

Hiya Pepsi! Here to review this poem :) I actually really enjoyed this. I thought the message was meaningful but also really true. Not necessarily to you, but I think ...