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Re: Chapter One! Estes Park, Colorado.
Hi Mai! Here to review your story :) So I'll start off this review with what I liked, then I'll move on to a few suggestions and I'll end it ...
Nov 9, 2013 -
Re: "Technologies’ Progression, A Way to Development"
Hi Kayle! Here to give feedback on this article of yours. I'll start of with what I liked about it, and one is that I think you've raised some very ...
Oct 2, 2013 -
Re: Ravenwood Investigations Part 1
Hi Liaya! Here to review your story this fine review day! What I liked about this piece was that there was a cool plot idea here emerging about waking up ...
Sep 29, 2013 -
Re: The Ring
Hi gravity! So this piece of yours has fallen victim to my first review I've done in quite a while, so sorry if it's a bit shoddy but I'll try ...
Sep 29, 2013 -
Re: The Boy Who Broke Mirrors (Chapter Nine)
Hi Skins! Apologies for the lateness of this review. Right it's been a while since I read the last part of this novel, so apologies if I repeat anything which ...
Sep 8, 2013 -
Re: Prologue
Hi Sam! So as far as prologues go, I'm not really sure I generally like them because they're not always necessary in my opinion. I think obviously it's something I'll ...
Sep 1, 2013 -
Re: High Schoolian Love
Hiya tgirly! I think lyrics are my favourite thing to review, but when it comes to lyrics about love (which tend to be the majority) I tend to be a ...
Sep 1, 2013 -
Re: LAPIS :Chapter 2:
Hey Maddie! I told you I'd get to this yesterday but I got really distracted and all but nevertheless I am here now! I will definitely get to all the ...
Aug 29, 2013 -
Re: A dive into the abyss
Hiya Leo, here to review as requested! I'll start off my review with what I liked about this piece and I think that that's mainly the idea behind it. I ...
Aug 27, 2013 -
Re: Find Judy
Hi Hannah and Judy! This was really, really lovely to read! I think it's amazing that an eleven year old can write this well. Especially as English is their second-language. ...
Aug 25, 2013 -
Re: Her
Hi! Okay so when I was reading this, I thought that wow you've got a really good way of describing things. Not only that, but it's done in quite a ...
Aug 25, 2013 -
Re: Warped Prison
Hi Questio! Here to review your story~ I guess the thing I love the most about this is really the concept and theme behind it all. And then when I ...
Aug 25, 2013 -
Re: The Devil In Me
Hiya Shiksha! As soon as I saw the title and description, I knew I just had to read it. It came off as very intriguing to me and I can ...
Aug 25, 2013 -
Re: Anecdote Worthy Travels
Hello, cj! I thought this was quite a cute story, it told a story of three relatives who seem really close and together. The inside joke thing was pretty funny, ...
Aug 25, 2013 -
Re: Dream and Reality: Chapter 1, Part 1
Hi Gold! Aaaah do you know how much I hate it when I'm reading something in a story then it turns out to be a dream? No I'm just kidding ...
Aug 25, 2013
