User avatar

ArcticMonkey

Do I Wanna Know?

  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Romantic Re: Chapter One! Estes Park, Colorado.

    Hi Mai! Here to review your story :) So I'll start off this review with what I liked, then I'll move on to a few suggestions and I'll end it ...

    Nov 9, 2013
  • Article / Essay » General, Technology Re: "Technologies’ Progression, A Way to Development"

    Hi Kayle! Here to give feedback on this article of yours. I'll start of with what I liked about it, and one is that I think you've raised some very ...

    Oct 2, 2013
  • Short Story » Supernatural, Horror Re: Ravenwood Investigations Part 1

    Hi Liaya! Here to review your story this fine review day! What I liked about this piece was that there was a cool plot idea here emerging about waking up ...

    Sep 29, 2013
  • Short Story » Realistic, Romantic Re: The Ring

    Hi gravity! So this piece of yours has fallen victim to my first review I've done in quite a while, so sorry if it's a bit shoddy but I'll try ...

    Sep 29, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, General Re: The Boy Who Broke Mirrors (Chapter Nine)

    Hi Skins! Apologies for the lateness of this review. Right it's been a while since I read the last part of this novel, so apologies if I repeat anything which ...

    Sep 8, 2013
  • Other » Action / Adventure, Teen Fiction Re: Prologue

    Hi Sam! So as far as prologues go, I'm not really sure I generally like them because they're not always necessary in my opinion. I think obviously it's something I'll ...

    Sep 1, 2013
  • Lyrics » Romantic, Realistic Re: High Schoolian Love

    Hiya tgirly! I think lyrics are my favourite thing to review, but when it comes to lyrics about love (which tend to be the majority) I tend to be a ...

    Sep 1, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction Re: LAPIS :Chapter 2:

    Hey Maddie! I told you I'd get to this yesterday but I got really distracted and all but nevertheless I am here now! I will definitely get to all the ...

    Aug 29, 2013
  • Short Story » Narrative, Realistic Re: A dive into the abyss

    Hiya Leo, here to review as requested! I'll start off my review with what I liked about this piece and I think that that's mainly the idea behind it. I ...

    Aug 27, 2013
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: Find Judy

    Hi Hannah and Judy! This was really, really lovely to read! I think it's amazing that an eleven year old can write this well. Especially as English is their second-language. ...

    Aug 25, 2013
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Her

    Hi! Okay so when I was reading this, I thought that wow you've got a really good way of describing things. Not only that, but it's done in quite a ...

    Aug 25, 2013
  • Short Story » Narrative, Other Re: Warped Prison

    Hi Questio! Here to review your story~ I guess the thing I love the most about this is really the concept and theme behind it all. And then when I ...

    Aug 25, 2013
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Other Re: The Devil In Me

    Hiya Shiksha! As soon as I saw the title and description, I knew I just had to read it. It came off as very intriguing to me and I can ...

    Aug 25, 2013
  • Short Story » Realistic, Humor Re: Anecdote Worthy Travels

    Hello, cj! I thought this was quite a cute story, it told a story of three relatives who seem really close and together. The inside joke thing was pretty funny, ...

    Aug 25, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Dream and Reality: Chapter 1, Part 1

    Hi Gold! Aaaah do you know how much I hate it when I'm reading something in a story then it turns out to be a dream? No I'm just kidding ...

    Aug 25, 2013


My life, my loves, where are they now?
— Richard Linklater