Arathorth

Hey, thanks so much for this review, it means a lot. I suppose the line about the moon being warmer together is basically explaining how not feeling alone makes everything ...

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Hey! So this is cool, and by cool I mean poetry in the weirdest and purest form. The thing I love about it is the length. You have demonstrated that ...

Woah, how do I not know that by now!? Thanks a bunch, I've always wanted to know to do that!%uD83D%uDE1D

Hey, I love this - it flows really nicely and although simple is quite powerful, well done :) On to criticism, of which there is not much: Firstly, your fourth ...

Hey! Thanks so much for the review and the kind words. I guess the whole smile metaphor was to contrast with the terror of the events and it was really ...

Wow, thank you so much! I'm really glad you enjoyed it. Have a good day! - Arathorth

Hey! Thanks very much for the review. I agree with your comments, I guess the bursts of emotion in between the rest was to portray how grief takes you at ...

I'm glad you enjoyed it! %uD83D%uDE03

Hey, thank you so much, it really means a lot! I don't speak from personal experience thankfully, but I find sadness and grief fascinating emotions, and I guess I draw ...

Thanks very much for the kind words! I love the quote, didn't realise the similarities. Also, thanks so much for pointing out that error, it completely slipped through my checks. ...

Thank you so much for the kind words, I'm glad you enjoyed it! - Arathorth

Wow, thank you so much for the kind words. I really enjoyed writing this, so I'm glad it shows. Thanks again!! -Arathorth

Hey! This is such a beautiful description, I love the deep meaning behind every stanza. You truly have a gift for painting a scene with words, and your imagery is ...

Hey! This poem is so intriguing and beautiful that I had to read it several times to take it all in! I love the ambiguity of the subject matter, and ...

Thanks very much for your review! I get what you say about 'confetti'. I suppose I was going for contrat in the imagery and the context of the word, but ...