Arashi

Nice tribute to Emily :) I also know some ppl that have cancer. Sometimes you just have to let it out. I agree as well with everyone above youre being ...

Haahah reminds me a bit of D.N.Angel or other video games lol nice done keep it up I especially like how you linked the words together. Well done I will ...

you might want to make the poem a bit longer? other than that it was nicely done :) you could have ended it differently for example But dreaming in every ...

Simply beautiful in its utmost original form! "Places them face to face And in that moment, they have harnessed the fates' Very well done I especially liked how you added ...

WOW your 13? definitely you have a great way with words. I liked your poem it was different. Mostly when something like that happens you hate the girl..you projected your ...

Consumed is a wonderful poem I like how it doesnt scream me, me, me rather you say it without saying it. Now I'm sure theres a word for that lol ...

It was very hero/salvation type of poem nice read. It has sort of a mythological feel to it. It was great, "But in the carnal quest for fulfillment They lost ...

GREAT POEM! I liked that whole analogy of our love is like a river. Short and sweet to the point nicely done. Could use some editing but what poem couldnt? ...

Hahaha it didnt bother me lol great story I liked how you got it going. I HATE Galada lol down with Galada I hope she gets eaten by a dragon ...

I thought it was quite good lol umm I liked the story line and how you defined your relationship with your friend. Good job :) I hope to read it ...

Great poem the end I think in my opinion your last line with ending the poem...doesnt really do the poem justice. Feels unfinished anyhow it was fun reading it :)

WOW I am honestly jealous I will aspire to writer better hahaha I need a new muse to write an amazing poem as this. It reminds me of a poem ...

I like it it has a nice feel to it. I dont like how everyone is labled and put into boxes lol which is why I liked your poem. I ...

Your light is like venom- With its beams phosphorescent It kills once it penetrates In that perfect shaped crescent. I love this part dont change it lol I liked how ...

Its a great read but it feels over flown as if your feelings jus spilled out. The dark fire reflects a burning heart This is a great line. I think ...