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Re: The Real Doctor
Hello Zenith Here is my review : I loved the overall suspense laced theme of the story. I enjoyed the mental-hospital/asylum setting of the story, such settings usually promise extreme ...
Jun 11, 2020 -
Re: Last walk
Hello Traves, my old friend! I'm glad I'll be reviewing a villanelle. This is the first time, I'll be doing it and it will definitely be a learning experience for ...
May 15, 2020 -
Re: Waves
Hello Zenith! I am personally a big fan of metaphors. And it was so nice to read a poem laced with it. I enjoyed the whole experience of reading it. ...
May 15, 2020 -
Re: Help
Hello mechasvi969! Here is my review : Grammar issues : Both didn’t stop as well I. [as well as me] nothing to enjoy but journey. [article missing] a really hard ...
May 13, 2020 -
Re: The First Showers
Hello rudrAbhinav ! I read your poem, and here's my review. Loved the imageries, these were my favorite ones : Kiss the dry soil With your promises of return Evaporating ...
May 13, 2020 -
Re: The Ghost
Hello Ayushinav I read your story and here's my review. Which movie does the story remind me of? The Babadook (2014). Your story consists of elements very similar to Jungian ...
May 13, 2020 -
Re: Stars
Hello lukekazey!! I loved this short piece, simple and sweet. Coming on every bit one by one. First of all, I loved the whole overall theme, the structure of the ...
Dec 14, 2018 -
Re: The title of this is at the end.
Hello Traves! While reviewing a poem/story/etc, what one does is, he runs his mind through words and phrases, jumps from line to line and slides from para to para. And ...
Aug 8, 2018 -
Re: Paraphrase.
Hi Arpanekha! Glad to meet you. There exists a spectrum of poems on young writers society. And I appreciate its diversity. Your poem stands as a testimony to it. Review ...
Aug 4, 2018 -
Re: to my father
Hi Aaliyah! I love the title of the poem, especially the fact that it is written in small case. I love the overall narrative add it doesn't rant about the ...
Aug 4, 2018 -
Re: The brook
Hello izzie! I loved the title first of all. Tennyson's poem was one of my favorite while I was growing up. Review I love the fact that you have this ...
Aug 4, 2018 -
Re: Clear water and dry salt
Hello Traves! I like the rap-like meter you have in the second paragraph. Though I am not a fan of change in rhyme schemes in every paragraph, yet the poem ...
Aug 3, 2018 -
Re: Why I disappeared from all social media permanently.
Hello Traves! I am an active follower of yours, and have been following your pieces for a long time. And from my experience I very well know the fact that ...
Aug 3, 2018 -
Re: End of the world
Hello Rohan! This is probably the best piece I have ever stumbled upon since I started writing on yws. I have been following your pieces for a long time. I ...
Aug 3, 2018
