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  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Real Doctor

    Hello Zenith Here is my review : I loved the overall suspense laced theme of the story. I enjoyed the mental-hospital/asylum setting of the story, such settings usually promise extreme ...

    Jun 11, 2020
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Last walk

    Hello Traves, my old friend! I'm glad I'll be reviewing a villanelle. This is the first time, I'll be doing it and it will definitely be a learning experience for ...

    May 15, 2020
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Waves

    Hello Zenith! I am personally a big fan of metaphors. And it was so nice to read a poem laced with it. I enjoyed the whole experience of reading it. ...

    May 15, 2020
  • Art » Literature, General Re: Help

    Hello mechasvi969! Here is my review : Grammar issues : Both didn’t stop as well I. [as well as me] nothing to enjoy but journey. [article missing] a really hard ...

    May 13, 2020
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: The First Showers

    Hello rudrAbhinav ! I read your poem, and here's my review. Loved the imageries, these were my favorite ones : Kiss the dry soil With your promises of return Evaporating ...

    May 13, 2020
  • Short Story » General, Other Re: The Ghost

    Hello Ayushinav I read your story and here's my review. Which movie does the story remind me of? The Babadook (2014). Your story consists of elements very similar to Jungian ...

    May 13, 2020
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Romantic Re: Stars

    Hello lukekazey!! I loved this short piece, simple and sweet. Coming on every bit one by one. First of all, I loved the whole overall theme, the structure of the ...

    Dec 14, 2018
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Satire Re: The title of this is at the end.

    Hello Traves! While reviewing a poem/story/etc, what one does is, he runs his mind through words and phrases, jumps from line to line and slides from para to para. And ...

    Aug 8, 2018
  • Poetry » Teen Fiction, Realistic Re: Paraphrase.

    Hi Arpanekha! Glad to meet you. There exists a spectrum of poems on young writers society. And I appreciate its diversity. Your poem stands as a testimony to it. Review ...

    Aug 4, 2018
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: to my father

    Hi Aaliyah! I love the title of the poem, especially the fact that it is written in small case. I love the overall narrative add it doesn't rant about the ...

    Aug 4, 2018
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The brook

    Hello izzie! I loved the title first of all. Tennyson's poem was one of my favorite while I was growing up. Review I love the fact that you have this ...

    Aug 4, 2018
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Clear water and dry salt

    Hello Traves! I like the rap-like meter you have in the second paragraph. Though I am not a fan of change in rhyme schemes in every paragraph, yet the poem ...

    Aug 3, 2018
  • Article / Essay » Culture, General Re: Why I disappeared from all social media permanently.

    Hello Traves! I am an active follower of yours, and have been following your pieces for a long time. And from my experience I very well know the fact that ...

    Aug 3, 2018
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Narrative Re: End of the world

    Hello Rohan! This is probably the best piece I have ever stumbled upon since I started writing on yws. I have been following your pieces for a long time. I ...

    Aug 3, 2018


Poetry is thoughts that breathe, and words that burn.
— Thomas Gray