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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Can You See Me? (Chapter One)

    Alright, so now that HP is over and I've managed to finish my assignments I am ready to review. Go me! Sorry for the wait, though. But you know what: ...

    Nov 23, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Racing to Death~Chapter 1

    Here I am! Sorry for the long wait I just couldn't get around to the review till now. Again, as I mentioned before, WRFF thread is the only time I ...

    Nov 22, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: To all my best friends on YWS.

    Awww, thanks, you're my bestest friend too! In fact, everyone is. :D THIS IS SO COOL! I ended up singing it in the end, look, I still have it in ...

    Nov 22, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Deleted

    As I say to everyone else who I review who hasn't asked me specicifally in my WRFF, I will do this without going through and nitpicking but just grab at ...

    Nov 21, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: *deleted*

    I wasn't going to do nitpicks but when I saw your tense work I couldn't help it. If you want proper nitpicks and such request in my WRFF thread as ...

    Nov 20, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Letter from your Shadow

    As requested, I am here. I just read over this and I know that I'm not going to be much help as it is already great. But anway, I'll try. ...

    Nov 19, 2010
  • Script » General, General Re: Freya's Replacement (Episode 1)

    I.Nitpicks: GWENDOLYN sweeps past it, smartly dressed , and on her way home from work. Instead of using a comma, I suggest you use and. It fits well and makes ...

    Nov 19, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Racing to Death~Prologue (edited)

    So, this to me is a very interesting idea. I won't bother going through nitpicks, though I will help you try and improve what you already have. (Sorry, only those ...

    Nov 19, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The Bourreau and the Waltz Dancer - Ch. 1 OLD

    Roal - BUDDY! What's going down? Yep, as promised, I am here to review your work. Cassa de Review-ae never turns down a review no matter how big or small. ...

    Nov 18, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Can You See Me? (Prologue)

    Skins, I am here and I am ready to do some reviewin'. Mostly everyone has reported on every 'lil nitpick so I don't think I have to go over it ...

    Nov 15, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: My Addiction's Core

    Urgh, I cannot go into a detailed review but I can tell you how much I loved this. I got the meaning of it from the very first line and ...

    Nov 13, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Alezrani Chapter 7 (Summary Included)

    I'm here, as promised! I. Nitpicks: “I did not want to see that ! ” Forgot to close this sentence off. I say an exclamation mark fits into here perfectly. ...

    Nov 10, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Dark

    Ooo, a poetry request; I'll see what I can do! As promised, I am here. I just want to warn you I am not the best with poetry but I ...

    Nov 9, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Luna 1

    I am here as promised. I've read this chapter millions of times but never reviewed it so maybe now that I am I'll see it with new eyes...probably not, it'll ...

    Nov 8, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Munera - 4

    I actually couldn't find any grammar faults with this and as with all your writings, I loved it! Seriously you're like the best writer on this site and I do ...

    Nov 7, 2010


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