Anonamuse

I loved The Hollow Kingdom I think it's wonderful. As long as we are thinking about the same books. Although thinking about it, you're right, the describtions were a little ...

Thanks Snoink! I'll go back through it in a while to fix somethings and add a little more. I haven't done much editting yet, but I'm hoping I'll be able ...

Um...what the -blank- was that. It didn't seem to be anything more than just a bunch of noises. However it did get my attention, which might have been you're goal, ...

Periwinkle, thanks for your help. I really appreciate it. I've gone through and fixed the things you've noticed, which I thank you for. And I would like to add, that ...

I like your lyrics, they're good and the meaning, as I took it is a very good one. Keep on writing.

I agree that there are too many The's, but it's understandable, trust me, I do it sometimes as well. But over all I liked it, needs some work, but it's ...

I like your poem. Those are the main things that go through a persons head when they first get into a relationship. I didn't find much of anything to critic ...

I enjoyed your lyrics, and I did fnd something behind your lyrics. Which I guess means a freak. But I thought they seemed to be coming a Reaper following someone ...

I liked your lyrics, but they seemed to be lacking something. I can't put my finger on it, but it does seem to be missing something. I think I only ...

Bashing your muse I see. If you have muse that is. -shakes head- I understand where you got this, can't think of anything, then it happens and you don't understand ...

Seems to Emo to me, like you tried to hard. And I would just start over from scratch, that would be easier than trying to fix what you messed up ...

All I can say is, 'wow'. Moving, and it's something that needs to be adressed. The way we treat the planet is wrong, but then again so is man. Anywho, ...

Holy cow. Morbid, and romantic. How did you manage that one? It's amazing. I love it for no other reason than it's morbid, and very personal at the same time.

Love it. Seems real, like a letter written to David, or an entry in a diary. It's a good way to write. Like your style.

It's good, almost made me give up my dream of acting, but then I remembered that I do theatre. Your style is good, I like the way you brought everything ...