Annapurna

Hi there, Firstly this is a great poem, its exciting with a sinister element to it, I love how you have crafted the subject of good and evil and turning ...

Hi there! I love the simplicity of your poem, its clear but moving. It flowed really well although I'd say the last line is too long and disrupts the pace ...

Hi there, welcome to YWS :) I love your opening, its cold and sharp like a bite, so really reflects the idea of cannibalism and difficult parents. I also like ...

Hi there! This caught my eye, Greek myths are always so rich and interesting to write about and Helen is a pretty interesting woman... I've read many monologues and poems ...

Hi there :) First of all I'm glad to see sonnets are still around! I like this poem, it really captured the sweetness and passion I think you were trying ...

Hi there :) "a quite bedlam" - I love it. As a student myself facing immense pressure I could really connect with your poem, its truthful and powerful in its ...

Hello there! I really do like this, yes it's short but that gives the poem a striking narrative and so blunt it outlines the real pain and torture of love. ...

hi there! :) I really liked this story, it seamed to unravel itself as it went on until the reader really understood the situation and could relate to the characters, ...

Hi there! :) I think this is a very interesting beginning and I like the characters you have created; Maria seams like a really sweet little girl with a horrible ...

Greetings! :D I really like this poem, I think you have really captured some strong emotions and topics in this! I can really connect and understand the poem which I ...

Hi there! Just a quick review for you! :D This really caught my eye because Poe is my favourite poet! Also we are not that different as we are the ...

Hi there! :D Just a short review here! wow, I love this poem. This really speaks out and I can tell you meant every words because I feel as if ...

Hello there! :D Firstly I would like to congratulate you on creating a clear and consistent story! While reading I knew clearly what was going on and at no point ...

Hi there! Just a quick review for you! :) I really enjoyed reading this, I could follow the story well, even though I haven't read the first chapter. I think ...

hello there! :D I must admit this came across as quite confusing the first time I read it but after the second time I understood it more clearly and really ...