AnimalQueen

AnimalQueen here! I like the idea you have going here! I especially like that Veronica's father is Hades, because that adds a lot of drama. Throughout the series, I felt ...

AnimalQueen here! This is one of the best short stories I've read! I love that there's so much conflict around who Alison is. She doesn't like who she is, so ...

AnimalQueen here! I love the subject of your story, and I can understand Willow pretty well. I, too enjoy the stars (and the moon.) I prefer night to day because ...

AnimalQueen here! I like your poem! Especially the first stanza, I really like it when poems talk about nature. The second line, however, I think would be fine without the ...

AnimalQueen here! Great work and keep it up! Some problems here, though. First of all, there are a lot of characters. That itself isn't a problem, I just wish you ...

AnimalQueen here! So glad to see the next chapter up! It's a good one, too. I only have a few problems with it. The first is that I wish you ...

AnimalQueen here! This poem you wrote makes me think, and anything that makes me think is good by my standards. I like that you talked about Heaven, because there really ...

AnimalQueen here! I think your poem really shows how one mistake can change the way people see us. I like how you took all those different things and made them ...

AnimalQueen ! First off, killer story! You have no idea how much I dig stuff like this. I absolutely ADORE the supernatural, magical creatures, and anything even remotely related to ...

AnimalQueen here! This is the kind of story you don't see often, and I love it! I really couldn't find anything wrong with the story. I think it's really cool ...

AnimalQueen here! First off, I, like Jevan13 noticed typos, but they didn't actually bother me. It makes it more interesting in a way. And I love, love, LOVE the topic ...

AnimalQueen here! I loved the story! I can relate to this kid, because as a child, I too enjoyed hotels. I loved that we had cable TV and a pool ...

AnimalQueen here! Angel tears seems like an amazing noval, from what I've read. Whenever there's some kind of humongous injury/illness involved, or the main character in a book is terribly ...

Awesome poem, pthurism! It actually reminds me of two character's relationship in one of my favorite book series, but let's try to stay on topic here, shall we? My favorite ...

This poem is brutally honest but still beautiful. I love how the narrerater talks for so long about what they remember, before finally talking about how it's gone now and ...