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Hey, this poem is really good! I especially like the image that it creates for the reader and how it has emotion written within each line. My favorite lines are: ...

Hey @OreosAreLife, May I start off by saying that this was really good and very touching. "I'm too fat," she says, So she starts starving herself. "I'm too skinny," she ...

This poem is really good! I love the way it flows and how the imagery is purely amazing. My favorite line is "As I'm waiting to get on the block. ...

Hi! So, I think this is a good poem, however, the line "I remember those glasses of that window," flows a bit strangely. Don't get me wrong though, your poem ...

Oh my goodness! This poem is amazing! The metaphors are so realistic and relatable. It really hits the emotion of the audience, brilliant! My favorite lines are "This I know, ...

I really like this poem! The imagery in it is beautiful and the overall poetry flows really well. It also makes the audience feel something as they're reading, which is ...

Hello Madwriter7, First thing, great imagery. It is always great to have amazing imagery so the reader can easily picture what they're reading and you did that perfectly using the ...

Hello, First off I would like to say that this poem is beyond amazing and I love it. It is very realistic and not to mention that it is very, ...

"Dan got out of his car, and yawned." Unneccesary comma after car. I'm sorry to say that after the first two paragraphs I became very lost. Try to be more ...

The grammar is not very good. W in woke should be capitalized, "dude it's obvious to feel that..." Capitalize the letter d and put a comma after that word dude. ...