AngieCandy

First, I really like the flow of this! The flow and formatting is almost conversational and follows a very cool rhythm. I also really love the word choice and phrasing ...

Hi! I found this very sincere :) I would point out that perhaps you might want to use some indentation and more formatting so that the reader can appreciate your ...

This is a really good piece of writing. It hits really close to home because my twin sister has diagnosed major depression and severe anxiety and to see her struggling ...

I really like this poem! It kind of put me in a better mood, actually :) I love the lines "You are beautiful, exquisite; Anything else is far from the ...

Hi! First off, I'm sorry you have to feel that way because I do, too and it really sucks. This poem is totally relate-able and really quite sweet. I like ...

Haha(: I can definitely relate to this. I think this was very good at displaying what we feel while we are trying to write during writer's block and how it ...

I certainly enjoyed it!! (: I thought that other than sweet it was mostly honest and I loved that about it. :D I love the, "When she talks to me, ...

I feel the same way(: I really liked this:) Sweet and to the point. I liked the repetition of, "You'll never read this" and I especially enjoyed the last stanza ...

I was four years old. This is one of the things that truly make me feel horrible because I did not know about 9/11 until I was in 5th grade. ...

OOOH! I like this!! You could seriously make something out of this! I can see it now: "Call me Alice: A lovely coming of age story. -- NewYork Times" "Like ...

I used to feel the same way (the heart broken part) and yeah it passes and so does the writer's block. My sister is currently co-writing a novel after awful ...

Short! But very pretty! Sometimes the best things come in small packages! It's a memory, no? Or just a thought? I can picture it. A Sunday morning.. One which I ...

Wow. *APPLAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAUUUUUUSE!!** Poems like this show that if they message it conveys is strong enough, it doesn't matter the length. It doesn't matter

I did not find any mistakes. This was freaking awesome!!! I have some questions, though. What exactly happened to Jacksin? Why is everyone wary of him? What happened? Who's Laura? ...

This was awesome! At first, it had kind of a Madeline type feel to it! Unless you don't know who Madeline is... so..then... never..mind.... I felt bad for the little ...