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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Eternal Kiss

    Hey Emmy, Anger here as requested. As snow dies to a fire, I don't know why but this line just doesn't sit well with me, it makes me confused. How ...

    Jan 6, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Nicholas : Part One {final edit}

    Seeing as I've read a story a tad similar to this, my feelings might be a bit conflicted Okay, on to the review. I completely agree with what Calligraphy said ...

    Jan 6, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: (third edit) Power of Pop Secret- Erik's View- Part 1

    Hey Bubbles, Sorry I'm sort of late. The reviewers before me have dissected this piece correctly, and I might not have that much to comment on without repeating them. I ...

    Jan 6, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: A Questionable Drink (Rated 12+)

    Hey Perse, Anger here as requested. You know how much I love your work, so I won't waste too much time gushing about how amazing a write and poet you ...

    Jan 5, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: How Can I Forget?

    Hey, Anger here. I personally didn't like. I get that this is meant to be an emotional piece, but there is an insane amount of repetition. After a while all ...

    Jan 5, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Waking Hours (1/3)

    Hi Evi, I really like this story, I think the name struck me and that's why I had to read it. Plus I've been going through a bit of a ...

    Dec 30, 2010
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Rattles

    It's me again, here to stalk your poetry :D I liked this one but I didn't love it. The last two lines weren't one of my favorites because you seemed ...

    Dec 27, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Turn 1: The First Whispers

    Hello, You just blew my mind. Okay, back to the review. The opening of this story didn't really agree with me probably because it was quite vague and it annoyed ...

    Dec 27, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Lost+Found: Chapter 2: Housebreaking

    Again, Wow. Your story feels like a massive construction to me, like you're slowly placing the bricks down in anticipation for something huge, and I like that. The only downside ...

    Dec 27, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Chapter 1: When Love Comes Knocking

    Okay wow, this was really well written. I was reading and reading and suddenly I hit the end. I like your writing style here, and the mention of the 'Deleted ...

    Dec 22, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Photograph to Sand

    Hey Vampyre, I'm your reviewer for today. Seeing as this is a very emotional poem for you, I'll try not to go on a nitpick overdrive...but I will inject some ...

    Dec 22, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Falling to Break

    Hello, first of all I'd like to say I'm extremely sorry for not getting to this earlier. I just found it today -Yes I do indeed fail life- Secondly I'd ...

    Dec 21, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Forbidden to Forsake

    Is this a nightmare or is it a dream? ---> I don't really like this for an opening line, I think that if your going to ask this question you ...

    Nov 13, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Can You See Me? (Prologue)

    Hey Pea-brained Welsh person, here as requested, And I loved it. For your first time seriously writing in third person, this was great. You have this knack for bringing your ...

    Nov 13, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: God's Tuesdays [1]

    I liked this, I can't think of any nit-picks really. I like your writing style, and although this is the stereotypical ghost story you really made it your own. First ...

    Nov 13, 2010


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