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Re: Eternal Kiss
Hey Emmy, Anger here as requested. As snow dies to a fire, I don't know why but this line just doesn't sit well with me, it makes me confused. How ...
Jan 6, 2011 -
Re: Nicholas : Part One {final edit}
Seeing as I've read a story a tad similar to this, my feelings might be a bit conflicted Okay, on to the review. I completely agree with what Calligraphy said ...
Jan 6, 2011 -
Re: (third edit) Power of Pop Secret- Erik's View- Part 1
Hey Bubbles, Sorry I'm sort of late. The reviewers before me have dissected this piece correctly, and I might not have that much to comment on without repeating them. I ...
Jan 6, 2011 -
Re: A Questionable Drink (Rated 12+)
Hey Perse, Anger here as requested. You know how much I love your work, so I won't waste too much time gushing about how amazing a write and poet you ...
Jan 5, 2011 -
Re: How Can I Forget?
Hey, Anger here. I personally didn't like. I get that this is meant to be an emotional piece, but there is an insane amount of repetition. After a while all ...
Jan 5, 2011 -
Re: The Waking Hours (1/3)
Hi Evi, I really like this story, I think the name struck me and that's why I had to read it. Plus I've been going through a bit of a ...
Dec 30, 2010 -
Re: Rattles
It's me again, here to stalk your poetry :D I liked this one but I didn't love it. The last two lines weren't one of my favorites because you seemed ...
Dec 27, 2010 -
Re: Turn 1: The First Whispers
Hello, You just blew my mind. Okay, back to the review. The opening of this story didn't really agree with me probably because it was quite vague and it annoyed ...
Dec 27, 2010 -
Re: Lost+Found: Chapter 2: Housebreaking
Again, Wow. Your story feels like a massive construction to me, like you're slowly placing the bricks down in anticipation for something huge, and I like that. The only downside ...
Dec 27, 2010 -
Re: Chapter 1: When Love Comes Knocking
Okay wow, this was really well written. I was reading and reading and suddenly I hit the end. I like your writing style here, and the mention of the 'Deleted ...
Dec 22, 2010 -
Re: Photograph to Sand
Hey Vampyre, I'm your reviewer for today. Seeing as this is a very emotional poem for you, I'll try not to go on a nitpick overdrive...but I will inject some ...
Dec 22, 2010 -
Re: Falling to Break
Hello, first of all I'd like to say I'm extremely sorry for not getting to this earlier. I just found it today -Yes I do indeed fail life- Secondly I'd ...
Dec 21, 2010 -
Re: Forbidden to Forsake
Is this a nightmare or is it a dream? ---> I don't really like this for an opening line, I think that if your going to ask this question you ...
Nov 13, 2010 -
Re: Can You See Me? (Prologue)
Hey Pea-brained Welsh person, here as requested, And I loved it. For your first time seriously writing in third person, this was great. You have this knack for bringing your ...
Nov 13, 2010 -
Re: God's Tuesdays [1]
I liked this, I can't think of any nit-picks really. I like your writing style, and although this is the stereotypical ghost story you really made it your own. First ...
Nov 13, 2010
