AngelKnight900

I like this and I'm interested about your story. The only thing that I'm unsure of is the ending. I think that the chapter may have been a little too ...

This made me cry. I loved it and I felt so bad for this guy. Did he used to have a girlfriend and he imagines being with her every night? ...

Okay, I'm going to start with the negatives. Sorry to say but it's better. I think it's a little wordy and you didn't put much explanation in there. Also, it ...

Hehehehe, that's all I can manage to say right now. I liked it and this was like wow, in my face. What I like about it is that I was ...

Lol, this could have been your summary when you were making your book's portfolio but it's okay. But if you wanted to do a summary, you should have gotten into ...

I think that it's good but that's just it. It's good but not good enough. I think that you got something here but I'm not really getting any emotion out ...

This was really good and you managed to get your message out of here. In a way, the message got converted when you got to the stanza that says I ...

Okay, now I'm mad. I have read a lot of of good pieces lately and no matter how I try, I can't give them a good detailed review, -__- because ...

Wow, i really got to learn how not to be sooo speechless when I see a good work of literature. This was amazing and I seriously wish I could say ...

How I wish I had this dream but it never came T_T. Anyways, I liked this and I think what you said was brief and simple and it you didn't ...

This was so good that I actually read your comment on the bottom. Lol. I liked this because I could rely on it. I want to steal it and make ...

Was this like a day you felt something and just wanted to rant about it? I'm still in my early teens so most people my age I would expect to ...

I like it but in a way, it's a little too open like anyone could interpret this in many ways which in some situations is all right but I think ...

This makes me appreciate having my best friends to a great limit. I think this is a poem that shows how much we should appreciate the ones who love and ...

This was a wonderful start to the novel. I really can't find anything negative about it so I'm just going to with the positive. Lol. I liked this girl Anita ...