Published October 29, 2011
Aella Dione, a young goddess, runs away from her father to live with the wolves. While on a hunt, she discovers that she is not alone in the woods that are her home. A truly heartwarming and passionate novel about how someone who doesnt believe in love comes to learn it's real.
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Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world),
Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review!!
Anyway let's get right to it,
Okay...this one is a bit of a cross between a blurb and the sort of summary you'd put in a novel description, with a bit of a strong tilt towards this being a summary cause it doesn't quite have the right voice for it to be a proper blurb if you get what I mean there.
Anyway, so, considering this as a summary, onto the what I think about the content here. First of all, the fact that the main character is supposed to be a goddess is really interesting, that certainly seems to suggest that we will have quite a few interesting extra things there as a result of that whole situation, cause the kind of problems that a goddess encounters would seem to be a bit more exciting than what usually happens to regular mortals.
I also love what that last line seems to offer. As a fan of romance situations in general, I love the idea of someone who's not convinced about the power of love ending up actually discovering said power. It seems like it would make for a really fun read here at any rate.
Aaaaand that's it for this one.
As always remember to take what you think was helpful and forget the rest.
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Harry
Hi Dhiren, like AngelKnight I agree that this sounds a lot like a summary. If you are planning on making this into a fantasy novel though it sounds very interesting and I would love to hear more about it! Let me know if you post more of this on YWS; I'd be happy to review it. My only problem is that in the summary it sounds like Aella is going to live with the wolves and that sounds a lot like the novel: Julie of The Wolves by Jean Craighead George, but I'm sure you have a few tricks up your sleeve to make in an original plot. : )
See you around,
Calli
Lol, this could have been your summary when you were making your book's portfolio but it's okay. But if you wanted to do a summary, you should have gotten into more depth into it or are you thinking of new things as you go? I'm not too sure about your title thought because I don't think it could have a relation with your story but you're the author here. Good luck and keep writing and welcome to YWS.