AngelBaby88

Im not quite there yet its is at the part of the communacation tower where they are fixen to meet up with Selphie.

Thanks, iam such a final fantasy fan.... :oops: Sorta obsesssed, but yea Ill take your advice.

This sounds really great im a final fantasy fan myself if you havent noticed, no one has let me no how im doing on mine tho...yours sounds great tho.

Now that I look at this, there are alot of runons and gramatical errors, Ill try to rewrite it and than continue.

hey there you are...when did you post this...Oh yea you no who this is...6th hour with Jessie and Eddie...lol...see ya in school...

Thanks

Wow this is a great story, let me know when youve updated it

For some reason im not quite sure...i love to read and write but when it comes to grammar and spelling I suck majorally

I dont know Zelition but sure I wont tell her/him....thanks for the comp

I agree with Dummerang, the story shows true potential but what the hell...surely he would helped Kelly's seems to me he probally shouldnt ever talk to Kelly.

HI Karma...this isnt my beggining...i have more somewhere through all this.

this sounds real good :wink:

My mom nudged my father and motioned for him to join her in the hallway. Jacob watched them go and walked with his head down towards me. I couldnt believe ...

umm this is amusing and interesting

I ran out of time to type, I was typing while at school...this story is based off finalfantasy8...I really didnt care much for any game under 8, as soon as ...