Angel17

Three words; SHORT,SWEET, BEAUTIFUL! Great images created.

I love it. But honey let me share the truth, My pen bleeds my heart and soul These are my favourite lines. Good job!

Thanks for your feedback. But i was just wondering if you could tell me how i could make my poem have more emotion? :?

This poem had a lot of emotion in it. The poem had a voice which made more of an effect on the reader. I'm sure many could relate due to ...

thats quite sad. But i liked the poem, the questions were a good idea

It sounds a bit like a nursery rhyme, its a cute poem. I really liked it.

ooooooooooooooooh great cliff hanger!

Well it was a very odd piece of writing, but i liked it. The dialect for the characters were good.

WOW! A lot of imagery! It was a wonderful poem great work! :D

The words used don't really express your deep emotion. With hate there is anger and sadness and those emotions are not expressed in your words. Overall your poem was okay.

It was good, it really makes the reader look back while reading it. :)

Touch me to make me feel I live Do you mean make me feel alive ? I really liked the poem. But it would be better if it was longer.

Very nice imagery.

Writing about her in different stages in life in each stanza is a good idea. It was a little too long. But i liked it, it gripped me.

This was a really sweet poem, after reading it my first thought was 'awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww' !!! :)