Published January 25, 2006
Who?
The one who ruined my life.
When?
November 28, 2003
Where?
Somewhere between Annapolis, Maryland and Fort Wayne, Indiana
What?
He left me with no intentions of returning
why?
Who knows why! I as well as other people have been known to blame it on me, although we all know it wasn't my fault.
How?
The doctors said heartattack, but my grandpa's diagnosis was heartache, and it was my fault.
So...who?
My best friend in the entire world...my dad.
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That's pretty much how I feel.
Sad. Moving. Loving.
I like it. But I think the question thing is just too new to me... it just comes off as awkward. But I do believe it is in my own head.
thanks, but i have to give credit where credit is due, the question thing was my teachers idea. she is a genius when it comes to writing, she has taught me all that i know! THANKS MRS. YORK!
thats quite sad. But i liked the poem, the questions were a good idea