Angel17

Beautiful imagery and emotion is portrayed well. Great poem.

nice flow and good emotion in the poem :D

What you are trying to get across is deep, but the way you've written the poem is very simple which makes the poem lose its effect. Overall, it was a ...

This is one of the poems i was thinking about giving in to a competition about Respect. The other one was this: RESPECT I respect you because when you tell ...

Very beautiful

I liked this because i could feel the writers emotions. Very creative and descriptive.

This is a very sweet start! i liked it a lot

This was really funny. This is how i'd imagine stuck up people would think!

I like the advice in some stanza's followed with a rhyme. It was a good poem.

Nice! I really liked this one, great flow

WOW, I can imagine saying that to some people! Good job

Wow...well written. I agree!

Beautiful poem. The last stanza flowed very nicely. Loved it. :D

awwwwwwwww that was so nice to read!! :D

i like the varied pace. Its slow until the end and then speeds up, it added more of an effect. Also; lullabye should be lullaby.