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Hi! This is adorable. It reminds me of the insane Christmas wishes I had when I was small XD. You capture the tone of the disgruntled child wonderfully and this ...

Hi! I really love this poem! It has such nice movement and is so upbeat. I love the personification of the sun and moon, and how relatable this feeling is. ...

Hi! I'm kinda old, but new at the same time? I joined in 2019 but I haven't been on here in a year. As a piece of writing I found ...

Hi! First of all, your writing is really great! There was such a mystery about who she was talking to and why she was having such a hard time writing ...

Hi! I think this poem is so beautiful, how you tie everything together, explore winding ideas that lead back to the box. I especially love how the narrarator keeps guessing ...

Hi! I had waited for this and I'm not disappointed! Ashton is changing before my eyes and it's slightly uneasy. He snapped at Peyton. He said no. Good lord he's ...

Hi! This chapter cleared up so much stuff but at the same time you threw curve balls in! So what prompted him to become a germaphobe was his parents dying ...

Hi! I really like how you fleshed out the mysterious Jamie in this chapter! :) Even in his small mannerisms it's really telling who he is as a person. *applause* ...

Hi! This is a great start to the story! You establish the characters, their relationships, and other important details wonderfully. The POV is something you don't often see, usually YA ...

Hi! Okay, he's not at a hospital after all. You have outsmarted my book guessing abilities with your clever plotting. First thing first, criticism. (But the nice kind ;) ) ...

Hi! This is really relatable because where I live there's also not a roll of toilet paper to be seen. In any store, it's ridiculous. The first 4 lines of ...

HI! Like you said, I loved it. Like, you took the oblivious helicopter that is Ashton and you crashed it into the jungle of his subconscious. Hard. I have so ...

Hi! You opened this chapter, in my opinion, in the best possible way. Surprise! I was like, why are they so uneasy? But it made total sense as I read. ...

Hi! About time. (No seriously, if you took any longer I would have perished.) You have very beautiful writing and a story telling feel to it. Like, this is how ...

Hi! Here to review your poem! :) I think this is a really relatable poem and your writing is very clear. It's about being disillusioned about life, thinking nothing's the ...