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AnarchyWolf

Here comes the rain again, falling from the stars.

  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Humor Re: Falling In Love With An Idiot (Chapter 2)

    Hello! AnarchyWolf here to review :) First of all - what I liked, and what you did well. The first line serves as a brilliant hook. The italics just add ...

    Apr 18, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Supernatural Re: The last celestrian prologue

    Hello! It's AnarchyWolf here for a review. First of all, what I liked about this piece and what you did well. Aside from a few grammatical mistakes, you've written this ...

    Apr 18, 2016
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: A city at night

    Hello. AnarchyWolf here for a short review :) I don't usually read 'descriptive essays', so I'll give reviewing this one my best shot. I don't know how well it'll go, ...

    Apr 17, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Typo Alley~P Part Two

    Hello :) AnarchyWolf here to review! I haven't read the fist part, so I'm going purely on what I read here. Forgive me. Right - firstly, what I liked and ...

    Apr 17, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, Dramatic Re: first 500 words of ma book

    AnarchyWolf here to review! First off, what I liked and what you did well. I think that your character, Eva, came across well. You slipped in that she's a noble's ...

    Apr 17, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Fantasy Re: Zu

    Hey raindrop34 - AnarchyWolf here to review :) First of all, what I liked about your work, and what you did well. I like way you've singled out the fear ...

    Apr 10, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Historical Fiction Re: Inner Beauty - Chapter 1.1

    Hey, Keepwriting. Anarchywolf here for a quick review :) First of all, what I liked and what was good about your work. A lot of people make the dialogue modern, ...

    Apr 10, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Automaton's Heart: Chapter 2

    Hey Magestorrow - AnarchyWolf again :) Time for a quick review! So, now we know who She is. I like how she doesn't seem to be a stereotypical badass, nor ...

    Apr 8, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Automaton's Heart: Chapter 1

    Hey Magestorrow - AnarchyWolf here for a short review. Wow this is good. Firstly, what I like - I love the somewhat different description of the demon the most, and ...

    Apr 7, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: Death's Reign: Chapter II

    Hey Alice, if I may call you that. AnarchyWolf here for a quick review. First off, sorry for the slightly erratic review-order. I dipped in 'cause it looked interesting and ...

    Apr 7, 2016
  • Short Story » General, Fantasy Re: Bold Kings

    AnarchyWolf here for a short review :) I love this work. I haven't read anything like it in a while. It's especially refreshing in that you have no direct dialogue. ...

    Feb 29, 2016
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Realisation

    It's AnarchyWolf here for an awkward review! Yay! The description is brilliant. Like, really, really good. I could see the forest and feel the night. The personification of the trees, ...

    Jan 19, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction Re: Cat fight!

    AnarchyWolf here to review! She was running faster than she had ever run before, flying past locked class room doors and the multi-colored lockers of her middle school. For now ...

    Jan 19, 2016
  • Poetry » Other, Realistic Re: one touch, two perspectives

    First of all, I like it. The only thing that peeves me a little bit is the lack of capital letter at the beginning but if it was deliberate then ...

    Jan 19, 2016
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Forever Silence - part 1/3ish

    Paragraph one - It's good, and draws me in. I instantly want to know more about her grandmother and the memories. One thing - Spirits, not spirts. Paragraph two - ...

    Jan 18, 2016


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