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Re: Falling In Love With An Idiot (Chapter 2)
Hello! AnarchyWolf here to review :) First of all - what I liked, and what you did well. The first line serves as a brilliant hook. The italics just add ...
Apr 18, 2016 -
Re: The last celestrian prologue
Hello! It's AnarchyWolf here for a review. First of all, what I liked about this piece and what you did well. Aside from a few grammatical mistakes, you've written this ...
Apr 18, 2016 -
Re: A city at night
Hello. AnarchyWolf here for a short review :) I don't usually read 'descriptive essays', so I'll give reviewing this one my best shot. I don't know how well it'll go, ...
Apr 17, 2016 -
Re: Typo Alley~P Part Two
Hello :) AnarchyWolf here to review! I haven't read the fist part, so I'm going purely on what I read here. Forgive me. Right - firstly, what I liked and ...
Apr 17, 2016 -
Re: first 500 words of ma book
AnarchyWolf here to review! First off, what I liked and what you did well. I think that your character, Eva, came across well. You slipped in that she's a noble's ...
Apr 17, 2016 -
Re: Zu
Hey raindrop34 - AnarchyWolf here to review :) First of all, what I liked about your work, and what you did well. I like way you've singled out the fear ...
Apr 10, 2016 -
Re: Inner Beauty - Chapter 1.1
Hey, Keepwriting. Anarchywolf here for a quick review :) First of all, what I liked and what was good about your work. A lot of people make the dialogue modern, ...
Apr 10, 2016 -
Re: The Automaton's Heart: Chapter 2
Hey Magestorrow - AnarchyWolf again :) Time for a quick review! So, now we know who She is. I like how she doesn't seem to be a stereotypical badass, nor ...
Apr 8, 2016 -
Re: The Automaton's Heart: Chapter 1
Hey Magestorrow - AnarchyWolf here for a short review. Wow this is good. Firstly, what I like - I love the somewhat different description of the demon the most, and ...
Apr 7, 2016 -
Re: Death's Reign: Chapter II
Hey Alice, if I may call you that. AnarchyWolf here for a quick review. First off, sorry for the slightly erratic review-order. I dipped in 'cause it looked interesting and ...
Apr 7, 2016 -
Re: Bold Kings
AnarchyWolf here for a short review :) I love this work. I haven't read anything like it in a while. It's especially refreshing in that you have no direct dialogue. ...
Feb 29, 2016 -
Re: The Realisation
It's AnarchyWolf here for an awkward review! Yay! The description is brilliant. Like, really, really good. I could see the forest and feel the night. The personification of the trees, ...
Jan 19, 2016 -
Re: Cat fight!
AnarchyWolf here to review! She was running faster than she had ever run before, flying past locked class room doors and the multi-colored lockers of her middle school. For now ...
Jan 19, 2016 -
Re: one touch, two perspectives
First of all, I like it. The only thing that peeves me a little bit is the lack of capital letter at the beginning but if it was deliberate then ...
Jan 19, 2016 -
Re: Forever Silence - part 1/3ish
Paragraph one - It's good, and draws me in. I instantly want to know more about her grandmother and the memories. One thing - Spirits, not spirts. Paragraph two - ...
Jan 18, 2016
