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Re: Is This What You Wanted?
Hi Thewriter13, Amindor here These lyrics are very beautiful and touching, and I really think you should try publishing the song one day. It has a good rhythm and tone, ...
Nov 13, 2014 -
Re: Beautiful, Black, and Proud.
Hi forbiddenchamber, Amindor here Your poem was very beautiful, and I love how you addressed the reader and used your words. I don't really see any mistakes, except that you ...
Nov 13, 2014 -
Re: The Unknown
Hi Newmoon38, Amindor here. This short story is very good, and I enjoyed reading it. There are many concerns I have for it, though. Okay, well, sometimes a writer might ...
Nov 10, 2014 -
Re: These Walls
Hi Collideascope, Amindor here Your poem is so brilliant I'm just screaming excitedly on the inside. (I don't want to freak out anyone in the house.) It's very beautiful and ...
Nov 4, 2014 -
Re: A Dreamer's Struggle
Hi Thewriter13, Amindor here I enjoyed this so much, and it reminded me so much of myself and all those dreamers out there. I love it so much, but, of ...
Nov 2, 2014 -
Re: The Girl in the Moon
Hi Ruby68, Amindor here. Your piece is very beautiful and I really enjoy it. It has a great flow and an interest that keeps the reader going. Although it is ...
Oct 5, 2014 -
Re: Girl Of Imagination
Hi Skydreamer, Amindor here. This story describes my soul in so many ways, but the difference is that I'm still holding on to a bit of my imagination. That's why ...
Sep 30, 2014 -
Re: Gannan
Hi Payne, Amindor here. This story is simply amazing, and it has a great interesting flow that keeps the reader going. It reminded me kind of a story I'm about ...
Sep 30, 2014 -
Re: f
Hi Yastika02, Amindor here. This poem was very amusing and wonderful, and I couldn't help but laugh. It has such a great flow with the way you used the words, ...
Sep 29, 2014 -
Re: The Light
Hi Thewriter13, Amindor here. Your poem is wonderful, and I really enjoyed reading it. It has a very smooth flow, and it's great, although I do have a few concerns. ...
Sep 28, 2014 -
Re: Goodbye
Hi Hassanfs, Amindor here. This story is very beautiful and has a great flow that moves the reader immensely. It has a great attracting beginning that easily got me interested ...
Sep 28, 2014 -
Re: A Word to Keep
Hi Lamjingshai, Amindor here. Your poem is absolutely brilliant, and it has a great symbolism behind it. It has a great flow, and it's great, but I do have one ...
Sep 28, 2014 -
Re: Bounded by memories
Hi, Ranay333, Amindor here. This poem is very beautiful, and I also hope that your personal emotional feelings are well stable. I can tell that this comes deep within your ...
Sep 28, 2014 -
Re: I Remember
Hi EllaJasmine, Amindor here. This short story is great, and I really enjoyed reading it. It has suspense, and most good traits of a wonderful story, but I do, of ...
Sep 28, 2014 -
Re: Of Pride and Balloon Cars
Hi PerksOfBeingAReader, Amindor here. Your short story is wonderful and I love it. It's one of those stories that a child should read to teach themselves a lesson, and that's ...
Sep 28, 2014
