AmiiLightwood

Oh, this is fantastic! Absolutely breathtaking and awe-inspiring. Your vocabulary and imagery is just brilliant! Keep up the fantastic work! Well done!

Good job! I liked this - it's very light and sweet. Very funny - and I can relate to it! Haha I'm still smiling =) Awesome!!! Two thumbs up! Amy

Ahaha - mrpunctuation you've done it again. I thought it was hilarious =) The irony and the bad grammar just make it so much funnier. And yes, I do think ...

This made me laugh :) Good job - very clever ;) AmiiLightwood

I love this! The ending is - although rather grim - fantastic. I have no spelling or grammar nitpicks for you, so good job! Absolutely brilliant.

naww i love you aniwinchester - for liking my totally nonsensical poetry :) what would i do without you?

Hey there! This is fantastic- it flows so well! I especially love the second last line - I found it the most powerful of them all. I love how this ...

Wow! I love this - it's short and sweet and very moving. The ending is fantastic! Brilliant work! AmiiLightwood.

Thank you, thegillaingill. I used the comma instead of 'as' as it just didn't sound quite right. I will definitely add in that full stop! Thanks for the advice, AmiiLightwood