Hotel experiences.

I quite liked the poem - it was a nice idea, but it got really boring by the middle. No punctuation or correct use of grammar bothered me to no end, and if you had broken it up into stanzas or done something more interesting to it, then it would have been aeons better.

This made me laugh
Good job - very clever
AmiiLightwood

(giggles as typing) Ummm... I liked it. I was going to comment and correct all your punctuation, but then the signature caught me. It made me laugh, and I enjoyed reading it, good-job.

In my opinion I would have liked to see more of a story than just seeing a list of everything you stole from the hotel. I liked "i stole the soul of a man who's name was Jeff"
that was different and I would've enjoyed more of a story or deeper meaning in the poem, that came from the idea of this line, but thats just me. -Bettinger

Hello writing buddy!
First off, no matter HOW MUCH I loved this,my writing teacher would've killed you. Until she saw the closing. :3 Honestly, this was a cute poem. I'd LOVE to see their reactions if a REAL hotel got your poem!

Hello!

I found that I rather liked this poem. It's simple and easy to read. It also sounded rather cheeky. I also laughed when reading it.

In your poem, it's one of the instances where repetition works. And it didn't only work, it worked really well. Good job on that part.

Another thing I liked about it is how you went on mentioning:

mrpunctuation wrote:i stole the soul of a man who's name was Jeff