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Wow!
I love this - it's short and sweet and very moving. The ending is fantastic!
Brilliant work!
AmiiLightwood.
wow...
i have to say this but poems that involve love move me.. the possible heart ache as well as the beauty of love itself... I love when both sides of love is used in one poem.. its a contradiction of something that will always contradict itself in life.. really beautiful peom!
Hi,
Congradulations! For the first time outside of school, that was quite impressive! You should continue writting.
This stanza:
"Please tell me I'm the only one
Or else my heart would break
If you were to love another,
My soul would surely ache"
That was just beautifully written! Good job!
Farewell,
A.