Young Writers Society

This is so cute :D And true. Well, I like this because it's simple, uncomplicated and straight down the line. It's easy to understand and practically impossible to misinterpret. The ...

Hi :D First of all, I love the idea behind this. It's very relatable and readers will be able to sympathise with it. Your rhyme scheme is constant, which is ...

Rusty? Try very talented :D I like this. The concept is fantastic, and like Fullmetal13 I love that you were able to turn your writer's block into a poem. One ...

Wow. I love this! It's so short, but the emotional impact is amazing... this is talent! Two thumbs up! Oh, and welcome to YWS! You'll love it here, I can ...

This is very clever! It flows nicely and the ending made me laugh. It's different - a great sort of different. Do you lie and say, I love you more ...

Wow. This is............ Amazing! It flows so beautifully - I absolutely LOVE it!!! On that day the God-man took His last, so tortured breath. But two days more, on that ...

Hi, Amy here! I think this is great. It is sweet, short, with a simple plot making it a no-fuss, easy to story read. You keep your pace throughout your ...

I must say, not unlike your other masterpieces, this is amazing! I am in love with the way you have structured your piece - the words flow so smoothly and ...

Oh, Wow. I'm battling to find the words to describe my thoughts on this one - it is positively awe-inspiring, absolutely beautiful. Your vocabulary is nothing short of magnificent and ...

This is beautiful. Morbid, powerful, emotional... Amazing. I had tears in my eyes by the time I finished reading it. I love the title - that was what initially piqued ...

Hello there! I have to say I really like this. It is nice and simple and paints a good mental picture, particularly towards the end. I like the storyline although ...

Hello there! I came across your poem while browsing and I have to say it's quite... unusual. That isn't necessarily a bad thing, but I do think that there a ...

Miss lolacherrycola!!! You told me you couldn't write!!! I love it - short and sweet and lovely. Perhaps TaylaChase was right about not needing those two words in the second ...

Jash..... Wow. Just wow. This is so peaceful and powerful - I absolutely love it. You have a beautiful, wonderful voice. The music is lovely and the lyrics are so ...

I love this - it is woven together brilliantly. The rhyming is great and your wording is fantastic - meaningful, but not too heavy if you understand what I'm saying. ...