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Hi! Okay, well this was actually pretty good, which I didn't it would be good since it was so short. Anyways, the description was pretty good, and so was the ...

Hi! Okay, this was pretty good. Although, no offense, I didn't see what the part about Tye had to do with the story. I mean, it adds a lot of ...

Umm, okay. Well, this was different, but it was actually kind of confusing. It didn't seem like there was much of a plot. I didn't really understand what it was ...

First of all, beautifully written. The description was amazing, and the emotion was so true. Although, the ending was a bit strange. It left off in the middle of the ...

Oh my goshness this was so sad! D: But the description and emotion were fantastic! I loved the point of view from the little girl. Most of the stories I ...

Wow. This piece was beautiful. It was very moving and emotional. The description in here was great, the emotion right there, just everything. Wow. I'm in shock. You're piece really ...

Wow, this was really well written. I'm guessing at the end she died? Anyway, it doesn't really matter how confused I am. This was beautifully written. The description in this ...

Hi! I just want to say that this was a very good piece. I like the comparison between the person and the dolls. Although I was a little confused about ...

I liked it. It was written from an older perspective from what we're used to seeing on here. The description was good. It was a very short piece, but I ...

This was really good, but I have a question: Did you mean to post this in Romantic Short Stories? It just doesn't seem like it's about romance, if you get ...

That was really cool, and I liked how you based it off of a song. The description in this piece was absolutely amazing ! I personally didn't find any spelling ...

Wow, this was really good. You really brought out the emotion of 9/11, and all of the similes and metaphors are great. I agree with Funkymomo, that you could've elaborated ...

This was really good. At first I thought it was going to be one of those sappy love stories that everyone seems to write now (no offense to people who ...

That was really good. I liked how the story had conflict, whereas some romantic stories are so predictable. This was very beautifully written. I especially like the line where it ...

I don't see how he's copying us, because ours is totally different. About the writing (Funky and Hammy, this is supposed to be a review): It was very good. It ...