AmeliaCogin

This was quirky, and I kind of liked that. It had an an air of mystery, but the imagery was such that it wasn't too unfathomable. The top reviewer has ...

Hi perse! Well, another excellent poem. It really did make me feel sleepy...whether it was intentional or not, it was brilliant! I'm always so jealous when I read your poetry, ...

Hi! I liked this poem. The sentence length, however, was a little bit mish-mashed. You maintain a good flow, though. I like the Idea of no capitilisation, but you need ...

Aww! I love this poem! I find that most rhyming poetry tends to be clumpy and disjointed and corny...however this one was flowed beautifully! I have only one nitpick...;) Never ...

Hi! Just wanted to tell you how sweet I thought this piece to be. You were so creative then, and, of course, now. I remember now I wrote a story ...

Hello! Ok, so let's get started * cracks knuckles* - only joking...Right. I liked this piece. It was simple yet conveyed a message. On a scale of one to ten, ...

Hello! I'm here to repay the favour! Ok, so, first impressions: this was a decent, simple piece. The title is cliched, so you may want to change it and think ...

I have to say, this is definately pushing the boundies on modern poetry. I have to be honest: it wasn't my cup of tea. It was random, hard to keep ...

Hello! I *liked* this poem a few days ago because I read it, loved it, and unfortunately couldn't be bothered to nitpick it all ( it is a bit of ...

Hi! Ok, so I clicked on this piece because the title really intruiged me. I had no idea where it was going. And I still don't. I don't know how ...

Hi! I just wanted to let you know how much I enjoyed this. I had no idea what you were going on about, mind, but I felt passion and emotion ...

Hey! I liked this story, though I thought your voice was a little flat. Aswell, you told instead of showed, and such technique can make the piece a little pedestrian, ...

When poems have very few lines, in my experience, it means that they are either deep and ponderous and philosopical, or 'shallow' - so to speak - empty, and just ...

Hey, just a quick line to say how much I enjoyed this poem. I like how've you've taken a lame prediction and used it to create a piece of writing. ...

Hey! I presume you're new here so WELCOME! If you need anything, don't hesitate to PM me or leave a comment on my wall. I just wanted to drop you ...