AmeliaCogin

Hi! This is a job well done. It makes a change to hear doom and gloom in a poem than the usual stuff, and I like it. On the whole, ...

Hello! First of all, I love your avatar! It's so pretty! I must say, I love this. Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful. The whole punctuation thing: not at all an issue. Actually, ...

Hi jen! Thanks for your post on my wall, and i'm here to review as requested. I haven't got the time to read and nitpick the whole thing, so, for ...

Hi! This poem is truly beautiful. It flowed brilliantly: you should be very proud of this work! In the way of nitpicks the other reviewers have already covered most of ...

Hi! I really enjoyed this poem. I can hear this confusion and frustration in your voice. You did a great job at portaying emotion. I loved how you sort-of rambled ...

Hi! This poem was upbeat and fun. I percieve that you have a keen love of dance, otherwise you wouldn't have written this poem. Unfortunately, I didn't feel any passion ...

Hi! Nice to meet you ( so to speak)...WELCOME to YWS! I liked this so much I'm making a B-line for the * like * and * follow * buttons. ...

Hi! This was, well, interesting. For me, it startrd off fab and then slowly went downhill. I didn't like the last didn't seem to fit with the rest of the ...

Hi! Thank-you for the last review you did of my prologue. Much appreciated! Now, down to business: I liked this. Often, I think Haiku's are a little lacking in emotion, ...

Wow! I think that's the hardest theme the generator has ever come up with! All I can say is you did it justice to the degree you could. It was ...

Hi! I'm here to repay the favour! I have to say that I liked this very much. I can tell that it's been very well thought out...you've worked really hard ...

Hi! I loved this. Nitpicks: Read cover to cover To see what lays inside - ; - normally, I'm partial to no punctuation in poems, but I do think you ...

Hi! Firstly, let me start off by saying that I really liked this poem. Your grammar was fine, but structure and layout was lacking. The huge sentences are too much ...

Hi, I really enjoyed this. It was one of those poems that I didnt really understand but made me feel so lovely and happy inside. I liked the layout and ...

Hi victoria! I liked this story. However, I do have a few nitpicks! Firstly, the opening line: it's quite unrealistic for a mother and daughter to be starting a new ...