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Re: A Tweet
Right...here goes...I have no idea what you're talking about, but it sounds great! I'm quite ashamed at how way-off i'm going to be, but, going by the title, does this ...
Jun 21, 2011 -
Re: Skin and Bones
Hello Jess! I really liked this poem. Your prose was very controlled: you did didn't condemn; you almost sympathised, which I percieve was your intention. I feel the sorrow, pity, ...
Jun 19, 2011 -
Re: Sharing light In Africa EXTENDED VERTSION
Hello Pixie! I'll just be reviewing the first chapter of your novel today, as I haven't so much time this evening! I promise that I will read and review chapter ...
Jun 18, 2011 -
Re: Sweet and Unspoken
Hello. I'm Alia and I'll be reviewing for you today. Normally, I hate rhyming poetry. I find that the writers often forsake emotion and passion because they are so caught ...
Jun 18, 2011 -
Re: Dear Mr. Rapist
Hi. I haven't any nitpicks; I just wanted to let you know how brilliant this was. The issue of rape was exposed in a brutal yet sorrowful way. Your prose ...
Jun 17, 2011 -
Re: The story of your life
Hi K. Thanks for your comment on my wall...I will write a Haiku one day... Anyway. I can't even say this was an interesting 'read': there was nothing to 'read'. ...
Jun 17, 2011 -
Re: Battle of the Hopeless (Part 2 - Felix)
Hi Polly. I liked this part. Your prose was methodical, blunt, and objective. On the downside, I'm not a fan of books in which the storyline centers around ghosts and ...
Jun 17, 2011 -
Re: I Do?
Hi jess! Please don't forget about us here at young writers! Only joking - I'm so happy for you! I thought this poem was so beautiful. I feel your passion ...
Jun 16, 2011 -
Re: Highschool Days
Hi! This was sweet. I liked your voice: I found this strength as well vulnerability. You've really captured how daunting it is, but put in perspective how, in the grand ...
Jun 16, 2011 -
Re: Battle of the Hopeless (Part 1 - Delem)
Back again. I really liked this, Polly. Nice prose, but in some places I felt that it was a little repetetive and awkward. Nitpick time! :) It’s easier to run. ...
Jun 15, 2011 -
Re: This Old Closet
Absolutely beautiful. You prose was controlled, though at times was a little too flowery. I loved how you told the story, and and made it so meaningful and emotive. Great ...
Jun 14, 2011 -
Re: Tears of the Spirit (Title pending)
Hello. Nice to meet you! I'm Alia. I haven't reviewed anything of your's before and I'm quite looking forward to it! I liked this poem. I get a sort of ...
Jun 14, 2011 -
Re: Little Tommy and the Red Coats Preface/Chapter 1
Hello again. Very nice. Very, very nice. The tone is controlled, and your storytelling is gentle and not at all over-prosed. The only problems I had with this piece were ...
Jun 13, 2011 -
Re: Dearest
Hello. Review time! Alright, so, I'm not questioning whether or not this poem was from the heart: I could tell that it was sincere. However, and please don't think me ...
Jun 12, 2011 -
Re: Fatal Attraction
Hi! Firstly, let me tell you how much I loved this. I haven't any nitpicks because this was just perfect. The rhythm is beautiful, the issue exposed in a raw ...
Jun 12, 2011
