AmeliaCogin

Hello! I know this is going to be a bit of a rubbish review, but I just wanted to tell you how much I enjoyed this story. The format was ...

Thank-you, Karzkin, for letting me know about your Haiku series. I really enjoyed it! At first, I read each in turn, and, feeling a little bemused, opened the spoilers. A ...

Hi! I'm Alia, and I'll be reviewing your piece today. Nice to meet you! *shakes hands* XD Positives: 1) Your storytelling abilities are excellent. Your prose is nice and paced, ...

This is lovely! As a bellydancer myself, I can relate, though, I'm not from Arabia, as my name suggests hehe ;) You did make some gramatical errors, which the other ...

Hello! My name is Alia, and I'm here to review today! This poem was decent. It was to-the-point and flowed well, and your grammar was impecable. I have two faults ...

Alia here to review! Normally, I never browse the fantasy section, simply because I do not enjoy reading novels and stories revolving around the topic. My main reason is that ...

Hi Bolshevik! I'm here to review for you today, and, let me just tell you, I cannot belive that nobody has commented on this yet - it's fantastic! Right, so ...

Hi cammie! I just wanted to say how much I loved this poem! It was incredibly cute and just made be feel all warm and fuzzy inside. I don't really ...

This poem is truly lovely. There are a few gramatical errors I will point out a little later, but for now, let me discuss with you the content of your ...

Hi Roxy, here to do a quick review! This story is sweet. Your grammar and flow is great, and I love the innocence of it all. Your Matter-of-fact voice as ...

Hi Aly! Straight in with a review here. This piece was far too casual for me and unrealistic. The 'holocaust' wasn't know as the 'holocaust' back then: mass murder was ...

Hi. Here for a quick review! I must say: this is absolutely excellent. There are so many layers and dimensions to your poem: I read it again and again until ...

Hello, Kat! Thanks for the feedback! Right, down to business: this poem was 100% better than your first. You took all the advice the reviewers of 'cursed' extended on board ...

Hi kat :) Time for a review, as promised. I have to agree totally with the previous reviewer: this poem was in all honesty decent, nothing more. I felt little ...

Hi Roxy! I'm here to review, as promised! ;) Let me begin by saying that this was very sweet. Almost a little too fairytale sweet. The happenings of your story ...