AmeliaCogin

Hello! First of all, I really did enjoy this poem. It flowed beautifully, and I loved the bluntness and description you used in your piece. Gramatically, you were spot on. ...

Hello! Masquerade covered all the flaws I was going to draw to your attention, so I won't nitpick...I really enjoyed this poem. It was simplistic yet lovely, and some of ...

Hello! I really liked your poem. Sometimes when poems are simple they can be emotionless and uninteresting, but your's was totally the opposite. It was simplistic yet quite lovely. Here's ...

Hello! First of all, I liked your poem. That's just it. I liked it: your words didn't move me to love it. It had a gentle, methodical flow, and your ...

Hello! First of all * like*! This was certainly...unusual. Perhpas better described unique. I loved the fact that I had no idea what you were talking about but it was ...

Hello. First of all, welcome to YWS! I'm sorry, I really didn't like this at all. The punctuation was awful, all over the place. The storyline was rather corny and ...

Hello! This poem is quite lovely... I suppose, though, it's something and nothing: a topic many have covered. But it's nice. No gramatical errors. However, I felt no spark when ...

Hi! I really loved this poem. The first stanza was my favorite - the flow was lovely. Here's just a small nitpick:) I am a masterpiece. But not everyone will ...

Hello! Very well done. I'm becoming a fan of your work! Keep it up! I loved the concept and your poem is very well written, though I would say words ...

Hello! Erm...yes, I like this. I got the message. Many of your descriptions are lovely. However, it needs a bit of work:) I don’t know how to say this, my ...

Hello! Sorry for the short review! I love this so much. Your writing is so beautiful! One thing I would say it looked a bit crammed in one paragraph - ...

Hi! I'll start off by saying that your grammar is fine. No mistakes I can see in that department. However, it packed no punch. I like poetry that really effects ...

Hi! I loved this very much. I'm into modern poetry, and I love the quirkinessof your piece. It was original and very cool. I love dthe descriptions you used and ...

Oh wow. This was beautiful, so meaningful, I could really feel the emotion pouring out of your words. I'd be interested to know where the inspiration for this poem came ...

Hi! I love your poem - very descriptive and very well written! Here's a nitpick: And the eagles still cry And fly so high; And the lovebirds still sing As ...