AmeliaCogin

Hello! First of all, I loved this piece. It was a beautiful concept and very well executed. The flow was nice and paced and you poem has a lovely rhythm. ...

Hello! A review as requested...Ummm, ok, so lyrics aren't my thing, but I'm going to have a go :) You've got a good beat going on here. I'm going to ...

Hello! I did enjoy this story. It was emotive, though only to a certain extent. You see, you told us what happened. You didn't show us or give an example. ...

Hello! In advance, sorry for the rubbish review. I really did like your piece. It was extremely moving and searingly well written. I couldn't really see any gramatical mistakes other ...

Hello! Welcome to YWS! Have fun and keep posting work! I'll be blunt: for me, this poem was a little bland. No spark erupted when I read your piece ( ...

Hello lily! Here to do a quick review! I liked this poem: the message it projected ect. I don't really know if the title is gramatically accurate. Shouldn't it be ...

Hi Hayden! Glad to see you've posted another work. Gramatically, this is pretty much impecable. I really can't fault you. Your descriptions and literary devices very brilliant and well-thought-out. Th

Hi Jess! Here to review! I really liked this story. I liked the format and the title was intruging. Here's a nitpick :) I surface, panting and heaving ( 'gasping' ...

Hello! I've never reviewed any lyrics before - it's not my forte! This piece is my first! OK, so, where do I start...I relate to Princess when she said that ...

Hi! Aww...poor you, no reviews! Never fear...OK, so, yes this looked 'real cool'. I had no idea what you were going on about, quite frankly. I guess it's just one ...

Hi! Straight to the review...Meh...all I'll say is the potential is there. Right now, you've over-described, haven't used enough punctuation, and keep switching tenses. When I try to read it ...

Hello! I really loved this poem. It was subtle yet at the same time vivid. I normally dislike rhyming poetry, but it is totally your thing. The rhymes you used ...

Hello sageleaf! Just a quick review. I really liked this poem. I've short and simple and sweet. The only critisism I have is the 'sometimes' you write at the end ...

Hello! You reviewed my piece so now I will do the same for you! Ok, so I liked this story a lot. I hope you're going to write another part. ...

Hello! First of all, welcome to YWS! Have fun here. Btw I love your username. Anyways, onto the review. I really liked this. It was a little weak in the ...