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The photograph
This poem means a lot to me: I was physically crying when writing this earlier. I hope that you enjoy it. Please give me your thoughts and feel free to ...
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The obsession
I wrote this poem last night...I've given an explanation at the bottom as to what it's about but see if you can guess whilst reading. Thanks!:)I pierce my reflection With ...
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Onlooker
Hi, I'd really appreciate your thoughts! ***Her tone monotonous,She relates the events Of an uninteresting SaturdayI nod politely:Occasionally laugh;Pretend I am actually listeningMy eyes flicker cons
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Who are you?
I hope you like my latest creation! I welcome constructive critisism, as always! Thanks AC ‘Who are you?’She asksPerfectly seriouslyI stare, taken aback;My lower lip trembles,The words I utterEmer
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Waves of Indigo
Hi everyone! I was inspired by poetry revision for my English exam ( who'd of thought, eh? lol) to write a poem with very little punctuation. I think it's called ...
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The path of the daffodils
Hi everyone! I really would like a few reviews on this. Thanks! The path of the daffodils Runs hushed;Take me there, my loverWe’ll dance besideThe swaying marigoldsWhispering in the breezeYou ...
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Between Shades of Gray
It is very rare to find a book which occupies your thoughs all day, every day. A book which is so captivating, it transports you, takes you on a journey, ...
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Beautiful Flame
Hi everyone! Let me say that I always write with personal experiences in mind and so I hope to convey emotion through my pieces. Please let me know If I'm ...
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Irony of Chastity
Spoiler! : Hi everyone! I've had writers block recently, and last night, suddenly, I was just flooded with inspiration - yay! Unforntuately, Random and perhaps weird ideas popped into my ...
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Imperceptible
Spoiler! : Hi everyone! I'd love your thoughts on this! Be as harsh as possible and feel free to PM me if you have any further questions ect. Spherical in ...
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Bitterly-sweet
You craftily arouse my emotionsTo stir a vivid spectacle; advance a Mirage, make it blossom within theBlackest, most sinful depths of my mind; You delve me into realms of Blissful ...
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Outlived
Spoiler! : Reviews are really appreciated! This is my attempt at a Haiku, and I think I've probably done it wrong. I've tried to make the underlying message as deep ...
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Child of misfortune
Spoiler! : Hello everyone! I wrote this quite quickly, so it needs a good nitpick. And, It's a fictional narrative first part pending
