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Ambrose1234

  • Poetry » General, General Re: Spear of Justice

    Spear of Justice is actually the title of the song that plays when you fight Undyne in the pacifist or neutral routes.

    Dec 29, 2024
  • Poetry » Spiritual, General Re: I Hear The Choir Singing

    Hello! how are you doing today? Well, I found this poem very interesting. Don't get me wrong, I did like the poem, but the setting I find interesting. you speak ...

    Dec 19, 2024
  • Short Story » Horror, Teen Fiction Re: Angel's Home

    no problem! I find that, if you want to get reviews, you have to advertise towards the right audience, possibly even putting yourself out there for others to see. I ...

    Dec 15, 2024
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Romantic Re: Heir of Asratoil Prologue

    oops I didn't see the novel/chapter lol I'm bad at this sorry.

    Dec 14, 2024
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: holidays

    Overall, good poem! I really like how you used symbols to substitute letters. The formatting is very interesting. I don't have any criticisms I could make, and the way the ...

    Dec 10, 2024
  • Short Story » Spiritual, Horror Re: It Waits

    Howdy! I'm gonna be doing a review: My my, so much to go over... Where to start? The pacing. The pacing is absolutely perfect. having separate paragraphs is really important, ...

    Dec 10, 2024
  • Poetry » General, General Re: When the World Ends (aka: a love letter to friendship)

    Thanks. I don't really know what else to say. It's not that I've been seperated from my friend, but I do feel as if I don't see them enough. They ...

    Dec 9, 2024
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: See Through Closet (a poem about the desire to come out.)

    Blue hair and pronouns! lol, sorry... I'm not good at this.

    Dec 8, 2024
  • Short Story » Narrative, General Re: Dust and Echoes

    Thanks. The story was kinda rushed, if I'm being honest. Ill probably make a story that is essentially this one, but different. I plan on using this setting for more ...

    Dec 8, 2024
  • Short Story » Narrative, General Re: Dust and Echoes

    Chara is the nickname of my best friend. They have been there for me, and I for them. Thank you Chara, for helping me and keeping me alive.

    Dec 7, 2024
  • Other » General, General Re: withuimfound

    It's better than what Ive done lol

    Dec 7, 2024
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: Never again

    I don't have any way I could improve this. I'm sorry for what you're going through. But you will find someone. Even if it's just a close friend, you will ...

    Dec 7, 2024


The strongest people are not those who show their true strength in front of us but those who win battles we know nothing about.
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