Amberla93

Hello, I'm in love with this story! Why? Because I've been though the exact same thing. (Except the ending sadly.) I wouldn't change a thing. It's sweet, simple and many ...

Thank you all for the reveiws, they were very helpful.

Awww, so very sweet! I loved it! Like you, I am a rhyming person, I've never liked anything of my own in this style. However, this is just grand :)

I loved this, it's so very... real. Even though it's meant as fiction, there is still a reality check in there too. Great job, really. It's very simple, but expresses ...

Wow.... That's the only word I can think to describe this, is just.... wow. I was near tears by the end of it. It' so sad, yet beautiful at the ...

I loves it!! Please post part two!! :D

Thank you both so much! I was writing this so quickly, I didn't even notice te errors. Thank you for pointing them out. :)

Hi! So, um, you should finish this! What you have of it made me smile, but then it ended. :( Haha please finish it soon and let me know when ...

Thank you so much! Both of you! :D

This was beautiful, I loved it. You did a great job! I loved the old english, made the poem more unique. I have no nitpicks for you, I loved it ...

What? No... I want to read the rest of it! You shold post it as soon as possible, this was very interesting! Please, please post the rest of ot sono!!

Thanks so much! All of you! The reviews mean alot to me!!

I LOVED this! So much emotion in it! And it's so very sweet! Bravo! Haha :D

Thanks so much for the reveiws, even when I may not have time to edit, I still read every one of them and I can use all the help I ...

Thank you both! This was one of the first poems I had ever done. It is my favorite I do believe.