Amberla93

Oh my word.... This is amazing. The ending, just kind of came out of nowhere. When the father shot Michal, I thought that was the charcter death you were talking ...

Um... please post more!! I was like so caught up in that, and then it just ended! So, please post more and let me know when you do! I didn't ...

Hello, I am in love with this piece, truly, it is amazing. I was trasnfixed in moments and have read it over twice. I love how you kept the flow ...

I liked the poem itself.. the subject not so much. I was once the biggest American Idol fan to be found anywhere. But the show has changed so much over ...

Hello, I'm here to give you a reveiw. :) What I edit will be in red. When I look at you I see faith, I feel trust, and I feel ...

This is amazing, so full of emotion, one could truthfully say that it's powerful. I love it, though I do have one small edit. In this line: " Because your ...

Hi, First of all, let me say...... You are wrong. this piece IS amazing. At least to me. I LOVE the truth of it. The first stanza caught my attention ...

Ello, Tis sweet, but a bit short. (And this is coming from a girl who writes many, many short things.) Maybe short is the wrong word.. It's rushed. Maybe you ...

Ok, so this one is better! But, just like Forsakinshadow said, you've got to get some more details in there, hon! This story is capturing my intrest quickly, but you ...

Hi there, As promised, I returned to read as soon as I was able. My editing skills may not be up to par at the moment, I have a killer ...

I am confused, or maybe I'm reading it wrong... I take it, whoever she is talking to has died? Lovley piece by the way... Maybe I just confused myself, I ...

Hi, I liked this alot, though it is very sad. I have nothing that I would change except what, BehindtheMask, has already pointed out. (It is very confusung when you ...

This is amazing, you have one grand sense of humor in my opinion! My favorite lines would have to be: #8 People who don't die at all and won't tell ...

Hello there, First of all let me say, I like this because it is different. Most poems are sad, lonley, full of anger, or all of those in one. (Including ...

Hi, I like this alot. Coming from someone who has very vivid dreams, you did an excellent job of making this feel like one. I do have one small nitpick ...