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Re: Mother
Can I say that I love this?? I really, really do. While I do agree with the people above me, it does not really seem like a poem... But I ...
Jan 10, 2012 -
Re: Pull the Trigger
This.... This gave me chills. Maybe because I can relate to it so much, or maybe because it's just that good. Either way, I liked it. It is a bit ...
Dec 11, 2011 -
Re: Pain Free
I like this, it's very... easy to relate to. I think we all have someone we need to forget. This is my favorite line: "I'll be pain free. My smile ...
Dec 10, 2011 -
Re: Before
I liked this alot. Maybe becuase I can relate. It's so hard sometimes to bear the name 'Christian' because of feeling like a hypocrite. And I liked how you expressed ...
Jul 19, 2011 -
Re: A Dying Ember
Okay, here we go. First I would like to say, that this wasn;t stupid. It was quite grand actually. I'm used to reading much shorter things on here, such as ...
Jul 13, 2011 -
Re: Dear Sergio.
Hi, I just wanted to say that this was sweet, and beautiful, while painful at the same time. I liked the story itself, It almost made me cry. I'm sort ...
Jul 13, 2011 -
Re: love,the lover and the beloved.
This is very... clean cut. if that makes sense. I can feel you seem to be trying to put emotion in it, but it siimply isn't there, for me at ...
Jul 13, 2011 -
Re: Untitled
I liked this alot, because I have freinds who used to do this, but could never express why. You did a wonderful job with tdoing thatl, I didn't see any ...
Jul 12, 2011 -
Re: Goodbye, my love.
This may have been full of clichés, but I liked it just the same. The italics gave it a light hearted feel, while the message you were trying to get ...
Jul 11, 2011 -
Re: Dear
I agree with PeaceAloha10! This would make a great song! I really liked it though it was a bit sad, kind of. I mean, I get it and the point ...
Jul 11, 2011 -
Re: Dance In The Rain.
Hey there, It's been a long time since I've been online, much less reviewed anything. So please bear with me. :) First, I like the poem itself, I found I ...
Jul 11, 2011 -
Re: Secret Inspiration
Hey, I can't put my finger on why... but I really like this piece. "But these thoughts and memories are faded and alas I cannot see. Because these memories are ...
May 19, 2011 -
Re: Another Girl
Hi I know those above me have alot of crtiques about the rhyiming and things of that nature. I however, love this. Maybe it's just because I can relate. I've ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Dear, YWS
Hi! This is wondeful, and it was me not too long ago, though I havent been on in a while.. :/ The errors have been pointed out. But I just ...
Apr 26, 2011 -
Re: Do not click this.
This is so cute! I love it. Though I did see something I thought I'd make not of, in this stanza: Afraid we will miss out, If we follow the ...
Apr 12, 2011