Amberchelli

I really like this, I mean it's simple enough to understand but it really sounds intellectual, I think I'm gonna read some of your other poems (if they are hwre) ...

It is all real, and it was truly chaotic. We haven't even been physically together in over a year but it still feels like everything just happened all over again

Thanks, and i'm alright now.

it was suppose to be angry, i was left by my father. this was my poem to him i guess.

We ended up breaking up shortly after this poem was written. thats the twist.

WOW, that was powerful, i really liked that you took a different spin on the child's mentality and showed him in a happiness and not depressed mood. Please keep writing ...

WOW!!! this is amazing, totally helped that i guess i gave up a few times. but this totally catches what happens.

You must live by me. because this totally explains how i feel about one of my old friends. she stole all the people i introduced her too. by being a ...

yeah thats what i meant. thanks :)

i like it, its quite interesting, but i think you should make what made him so ocd a little more apparent, why is he the way he is, it would ...

*wipes tears* THIS IS TRAGIC….good poem BUT TRAGIC… im changing your name to shakepere… (idk how to spell that…) its really sad, but easy to fallow and understand..

awe, this is really cute, i'd love to see it become a little more longer, and a little bit of emotion, but i still do like it alot, and i ...

confuzzeled, is the main character gay? but either way i liked it, although you should make gender just a tad bit clearer.

i love it, its wonderful, awesome imagery, you seriously deserve like a gold freaking medal :DDDD let me know what else you've published.

i really liked this, i dont do grammer reviews i leave that to someone else, but i really liked this, its awesome, althought you could make it longer, but thats ...